PAPER 1 Milstead Feedback

Students are required to analyze, compare and comment on the texts in the light of their understanding of audience and purpose. In order to achieve this, students need to analyze structure, language and style in addition to aspects such as text type, context, bias and/or ideological position. WRITING PROMPT

Audience & Purpose Structure Language & Style Text Type Context Bias Ideological Position WRITING PROMPT BROKEN DOWN

Needs to reflect audience and purpose— Writing Prompt CLAIM

Need to reflect audience and purpose! TOPIC SENTENCES

Don’t need these for the Text 1 options (Palermo & Wickersham) For Owen, cite as… (2-4). IN-TEXT CITATIONS

Need to work on use of vocabulary, tone, sentence structure and terminology. REGISTER

Text 1 = “What is Mustard Gas” & “An Address to the Soldiers of the National Army - Camp Dix” Text 2 = Owen’s poems TEXT 1 VS. TEXT 2

Order of argument points in the claim needs to be in the same order in the topic sentences. ORGANIZATION OF CLAIM

I need them at the end of your essay in the bottom left-hand corner.—Please. WORD COUNTS

When talking about sounds, needs to look like this: /p/ or /b/ SOUNDS

Contains a subject and arguable opinion. Example: “civilization vs. savagery” is not a theme, but it is a worthy subject for a theme. Example: “civilization and savagery play major roles in the novel” is not a theme because it is an easily observable fact about the subject, not an arguable opinion. Example: “An innate sense of savagery undermines the facade of civilization and morality" is a workable theme because there is an opinion that can/must be proved. THEME

When blending a quote, please follow the steps below: #1 Transitional phrases #2 Blending of CD (do you know who is speaking and/or what is going on?) #3 Use correct in-text citation #4 Use correct punctuation. BLEND QUOTES!!!!

You may revise your paper for 100% if it was turned in on time. Due: Thursday, April 24 th In order to earn credit, students must: 1)Submit revision to turnitin.com 2)Highlight changes made on hard copy and write notes in the margins explaining those changes 3)Attached revised draft to the top of the original packet. REVISIONS