Writing Memoir Leads Grabbing the reader ’ s attention with an interesting opening

Write from experience "In order to write a memoir, we need to see that literature is made out of the everyday stuff of our lives." "In order to write a memoir, we need to see that literature is made out of the everyday stuff of our lives." Lucy Calkins The Art of Teaching Writing

Where to begin Chances are that you ’ ve chosen to write about an event that has meaning to you, maybe even personal in nature. This should be an event you feel comfortable writing about. If it is a deeply personal experience, you may find that the writing flows more easily after you get past the opening. Chances are that you ’ ve chosen to write about an event that has meaning to you, maybe even personal in nature. This should be an event you feel comfortable writing about. If it is a deeply personal experience, you may find that the writing flows more easily after you get past the opening.

Types of Leads ~ Descriptive Descriptive leads ~ These ‘ set ’ the scene by painting a picture in the reader ’ s mind. Descriptive leads ~ These ‘ set ’ the scene by painting a picture in the reader ’ s mind. “ The doorman of the Kilmarnock was six foot two with pale skin. He wore a dark blue uniform, and his pristine white gloves made his hands look enormous. He opened the door of the yellow taxi that had just pulled up to the curb out in front of the building as gently as an old maid stroking a cat. ” --Raymond Chandler “ The doorman of the Kilmarnock was six foot two with pale skin. He wore a dark blue uniform, and his pristine white gloves made his hands look enormous. He opened the door of the yellow taxi that had just pulled up to the curb out in front of the building as gently as an old maid stroking a cat. ” --Raymond Chandler

Suspense Leads Suspense leads create curiosity in the reader ’ s mind and leave them wondering what will happen next. Suspense leads create curiosity in the reader ’ s mind and leave them wondering what will happen next. “ Suddenly, everything stops. ” --Alison James “ Suddenly, everything stops. ” --Alison James “ You must not tell anyone, ” my mother said, “ what I am about to tell you. ” --The Woman Warrior “ You must not tell anyone, ” my mother said, “ what I am about to tell you. ” --The Woman Warrior “ Every so often that dead dog dreams me up again. ” --Stephanie Vaughn “ Every so often that dead dog dreams me up again. ” --Stephanie Vaughn

Question Leads Question leads immediately draw the reader into the memoir, inviting the reader to ponder the events that lie ahead-it’s NOT a question to pose to the readers directly! Question leads immediately draw the reader into the memoir, inviting the reader to ponder the events that lie ahead-it’s NOT a question to pose to the readers directly! “ Why on earth had she shown up after ten long years, and what was that expression of fury on her face? ” “ Why on earth had she shown up after ten long years, and what was that expression of fury on her face? ” “ If I had a crystal ball to predict my day ahead, would I have done anything differently? ” “ If I had a crystal ball to predict my day ahead, would I have done anything differently? ”

Leads that introduce the narrator ‘ Narrator ’ leads introduce the reader to the narrator, acquainting the reader with the main character in the memoir. ‘ Narrator ’ leads introduce the reader to the narrator, acquainting the reader with the main character in the memoir. “ The name my family calls me is Morning Girl because I wake up early always with something on my mind. ” --Dorris Michael “ The name my family calls me is Morning Girl because I wake up early always with something on my mind. ” --Dorris Michael

Conflict Leads Conflict leads present the central conflict to the reader for immediate consideration. Conflict leads present the central conflict to the reader for immediate consideration. “ When I was six, our family was faced with a beast of a threat on our lives that would proceed to tear us apart, piece by piece. ” “ When I was six, our family was faced with a beast of a threat on our lives that would proceed to tear us apart, piece by piece. ”

Thematic Leads Thematic leads hint at the ‘ life ’ lesson that the memoir will teach the reader. Thematic leads hint at the ‘ life ’ lesson that the memoir will teach the reader. “ I was six years old when my mother taught me the art of invisible strength. ” --Amy Tan “ I was six years old when my mother taught me the art of invisible strength. ” --Amy Tan

Your lead… How will you invite the reader into your memoir? How will you invite the reader into your memoir? Which option will best draw your readers into your memoir and fit with the main lesson/purpose? Which option will best draw your readers into your memoir and fit with the main lesson/purpose? Try one or two different types of leads to see which is more effective. Try one or two different types of leads to see which is more effective.