tasks Analyze two writings Summarize … cartoons well Check your progress

请用 “ 中秋节的等待 ” 为题，用英语写一篇短文， 内容要点如下： 1. 简述图片内容，如情景、人物、动作等； 2. 分析原因； 3. 结合实际，谈谈具体做法。 词数为 150 左右 writing

scenes prepare the reunion dinner expect anxiously grandpa reason 1 reason 2 not show up Para.1 Para.3 grandma content Para.2 suggestion 1 suggestion 2

ASSESSMENT structure Is the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence? content Are all the details stated? Is everything to the point? Language Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any mistakes? Is there any advanced vocabulary? Are there any good sentence patterns? standards:

No 1 incomplete content points poor handwriting lots of mistakes Chinglish

No 2 good topic sentences neat handwriting effective transitions advanced vocabulary complex sentences clear structure Rank 5 Idiomatic (21—25)

Case 1 （陈菁菁） From the picture, we can see a grandpa and a grandma waiting at a table, on which are lots of delicious foods and mooncakes. The grandpa is waiting for a phone call while the grandma is looking at the door, expecting their son, daughter-in-law and grandchildren to come back home. It’s a quarter past one, but their children haven’t shown up. description

People are always occupied with business or other things, so they pay less attention to their parents and they are seldom in company with their parents, which makes parents lonely. Case 2: ( 沈一帆 )

Case 3 （罗蕴玉） Some people turn a deaf ear to their parents’ request to go home regularly. They think they are so busy that they can spare little time to stay with their parents. explanation

Case 4 （胡姸芳） In my opinion, what parents need is regular visit. It is no use giving them money, which will only double their loneliness. I think children should go back home to see parents however busy they are. Only in this way can parents live a happy life.

Case 5 （王晶） It’s our parents who give us all their love unconditionally. However, we even can’t accompany them regularly. I think it is where we are wrong. In fact, what they need is just our company when they are old. suggestions

May’s version From the picture, we can see a grandpa and a grandma waiting at a table, on which are lots of delicious foods and mooncakes. The grandpa is waiting for a phone call while the grandma is looking at the door, expecting their son, daughter-in-law and grandchildren to come back home. It’s a quarter past one, but their children haven’t shown up.

Why are they late or absent? There are several reasons. On the one hand, people are always occupied with business or other things, so they seldom have time to accompany their parents; On the other hand, some people ignore their parents’ loneliness, as a result, they don’t go back home regularly, even on festivals.

In my opinion, what parents need is love and care. Nothing is more important than a family’s reunion on festivals. So adult children should go back home and see parents now and then, no matter how busy they are. Only in this way can parents live a happy life.

describe keep the point cover key details interpretsuggest Part 1Part 2Part 3 be practical Summary: how to write cartoons well