MENU EXIT Transitions In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are.

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MENU EXIT Transitions In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are connected. Continue…

Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are connected. How could a transition improve this paragraph? The building was engulfed in flames almost immediately. The roof collapsed and the bricks were glowing like hot coals. Click to see a revision

Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT In writing, a transition is the smooth progression from one idea to another. A good transition helps the reader see how ideas are connected. The revised paragraph flows better because the transition helps to show the sequence of events. The building was engulfed in flames almost immediately. The roof collapsed and the bricks were glowing like hot coals. ORIGINAL REVISED The building was engulfed in flames almost immediately. By the time the first firefighters arrived, the roof collapsed and the bricks were glowing like hot coals. Next

MENU EXIT Transitions Transitions can signal different types of relationships. Click the transitional relationship you want to explore. MENU Sequential Order Order of Importance Cause and Effect Spatial Order Comparison and Contrast

Sequential Order Transitions MENU EXIT Use transitions like these to show the sequence of time or steps in a process. first during before second then at the beginning afterwards soon at the same time next finally subsequently last already later Next

Sequential Order Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Where could you add transitions to help make this sequence clearer? My pre-race ritual is always the same. I stretch every muscle in my body, slowly and carefully. I run a few warm-up sprints—each just 10 yards or so. I walk slowly down the track, shaking my arms and legs to keep them loose. I walk up to the starting line and get into position. Click to see a revision

Sequential Order Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT These transitions indicate the progression of events as the runner gets ready for her race. My pre-race ritual is always the same. First, I stretch every muscle in my body, slowly and carefully. Then, I run a few warm-up sprints—each just 10 yards or so. Afterwards, I walk slowly down the track, shaking my arms and legs to keep them loose. Finally, I walk up to the starting line and get into position. Menu

Order of Importance Transitions MENU EXIT Use words like these when you are trying to show the relative importance of people, places, things, or events. first second best worst main more important most important least important Next

Order of Importance Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT If a fire starts in your house, remember this: don’t panic. Everybody should prepare to leave the house immediately. If you see smoke, drop to the floor and crawl toward the nearest door. Before going out the door, feel the door to see if it’s hot. Don’t try to save your belongings. Where could you add transitions to help show the relative importance of these activities and events? Click to see a revision

Order of Importance Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT If a fire starts in your house, the most important thing to remember is this: don’t panic. First, everybody should prepare to leave the house immediately. If you see smoke, drop to the floor and crawl toward the nearest door. Before going out the door, feel the door to see if it’s hot. The least important thing to do is to try to save your belongings. These transitions stress the importance of some actions over other actions. Menu

Cause and Effect Transitions MENU EXIT Transitional words can also show a cause-and-effect relationship. Continue…

Cause and Effect Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Transitional words can also show a cause-and-effect relationship. In this example, the transition clarifies the effect of the first action (the cause). I was at the end of a line that stretched around the block. I couldn't get the seats I wanted for the game. As a result, Next

Cause and Effect Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Use transitional words and phrases like these to show relationships between events and their results. as a result because therefore consequently since thus so for if...then Next

Cause and Effect Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT The invention of the printing press had a revolutionary impact on European society. As a result, more people could afford to own books. Consequently, literacy rates rose, and ordinary people had an increased knowledge of the world. What transitions in this paragraph point to the results that followed the invention of the printing press? Click to see the transitional words

Click to see the cause-and-effect relationships PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Transitions Cause and Effect The invention of the printing press had a revolutionary impact on European society. As a result, more people could afford to own books. Consequently, literacy rates rose, and ordinary people had an increased knowledge of the world. What transitions in this paragraph point to the results that followed the invention of the printing press? Click to see the cause-and-effect relationships

Cause and Effect Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT The transitions highlight the cause-and-effect relationships. The printing press was Invented. As a result, more people owned books. literacy rates rose. Consequently, Menu

Spatial Order Transitions MENU EXIT Use transitional words and phrases like these when describing details according to their position in space (front to back, near to far, top to bottom, and others). above beside to the right of past in the other direction below down over behind in front of near under beneath in back of on top of to Next

Spatial Order Transitions PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Gardeners have kept the paths that weave in and out of the tall grass maze mowed and ready. At the left, a clearly marked entrance invites walkers to try the maze. At the center, a small clump of clover signals to the careful observer that the path winds toward the exit on the right. Which words point out the spatial relationships in this description? Click to view the transitional words

Spatial Order Transitions MENU EXIT Gardeners have kept the paths that weave in and out of the tall grass maze mowed and ready. At the left, a clearly marked entrance invites walkers to try the maze. At the center, a small clump of clover signals to the careful observer that the path winds toward the exit on the right. Which words point out the spatial relationships in this description? Menu

Comparison and Contrast MENU EXIT Transitions Comparison and Contrast Use comparison and contrast transitions to signal the similarities and differences between people, places, things, or events. but however unlike in contrast similarly like both in competition each yet although even though on the contrary Next

Comparison and Contrast PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Transitions Comparison and Contrast Many people think downhill skiing and cross-country skiing are similar sports. Although both require specialized ski gear, athletic fitness, and endurance, each requires different skills. A downhill skier travels at high speed down steep slopes and must respond quickly to sudden turns and obstacles. The skier works with gravity. In contrast, a cross-country skier travels over fairly level trails at a relatively slow speed, striving to maintain a steady pace. The skier works against gravity. What words in the paragraph signal the comparisons and contrasts? Click to view the transitional words

Comparison and Contrast PREVIOUS MENU EXIT Transitions Comparison and Contrast Many people think downhill skiing and cross-country skiing are similar sports. Although both require specialized ski gear, athletic fitness, and endurance, each requires different skills. A downhill skier travels at high speed down steep slopes and must respond quickly to sudden turns and obstacles. The skier works with gravity. In contrast, a cross-country skier travels over fairly level trails at a relatively slow speed, striving to maintain a steady pace. The skier works against gravity. What words in the paragraph signal the comparisons and contrasts? Menu