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A more personal approach Essay of definition A more personal approach

Gloria Naylor “Meanings of a word”

Christine Leong “being a chink”

Boring Prejudice is a problem that most people face at some time in their lives. The word “prejudice” comes from the root word “to judge” and the prefix “pre” meaning “before.” In human terms, prejudice means that someone in a situation has judged another person before knowing that individual as a person. For example, someone might assume that someone who is Arabic would be someone who is anti-American and dangerous. A person who prejudges another person only sees that person as an example of a type, not as an individual.

A better example would include specific detail My friend Omar experienced prejudice recently at the airport. When he approached the check-in counter, he was waved over to the table on the side and the officials examined each item in his suitcase. They took out his computer and turned it on to check each drive. They unwrapped all of the presents he was taking back to his family in Iraq and even punctured some of the filled chocolate candies. They took out each item from his meticulously packed suitcase and watched while he repacked each item. What they did not know was that Omar is an American and a patriot of the most loyal type. They were prejudging him based on appearances.

Read the sample essay on poverty Annotate the essay. Look for ways the author makes poverty real. What is the writer’s definition of poverty?

After reading To define “poverty,” this author describes the experiences of a character or persona to “show” poverty, not just tell about it. How does the author illustrate the concept of “poverty?” What effect did this description have on your ideas of what “poverty” is?

Moral of the story Much to my dismay, we will have to make these more personal. You have to tell the truth, even if it is not nice. You may use I more. You should use you sparingly. Do not preach. Do not try to motivate us. The only you should be similar to Leong’s usage. Even personal examples should sound formal. Use elevated diction. Speak intelligently about your experiences. Every paragraph must be specific and necessary to your definition.

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