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doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 2 Abstract We provide a summary of the changes made in the updated RA-OLSR texts (IEEE /2124r3) with respect to the IEEE P802.11s TM /D1.05 draft, which resolve comments in IEEE /0023r37.

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 3 Summary of Changes Made the RA-OLSR element descriptions in consistent with those for other elements Reorganized and modified the explanation of IE processing and forwarding, in 11A.9.5, 11A A.9.12 Improved TC generation conditions in 11A to reduce path loop formation Added informative statements in 11A , 11A , and 11A Added or replaced with may/should/shall Clarified terminologies –interface address -> MAC address –some terminology are defined –“flood” is removed Editorial modifications

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 4 Comment Resolution Session

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 5 RA-OLSR Comments Resolved Category Total CID Previous Closed Present Closed Total %Closed 1. Clarification/Correction % 2. Parameters % 3. Element Format532100% 4. Operations (Basic/Proxy) % 5. Jan’s Comments202100% Total : %

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 6 Category of Remained Comment Resolution CategoryUnsolved Past CIDUnsolved CID from 11-07/0023r37Total 1. Clarification/Correction (12): 1307, 1308, 1550, 1554, 1557, 1558, 1559, 1565, 1566, 3374, 3384, 4146 (8): 864, 1309, 1378, 1551, 2773, 2752, 3390, Parameters (0)(0)(1): Element Format (0):(2): 655, Operations (Basic/Proxy) (4): 682, 1525, 1553, 5707(2): 1563, Jan’s Comments (2): 2049, 2085(0): 2 Total :

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 7 Type of Comment Resolution CategoryAcceptDeferRejectCounterTotal 1. Clarification/Correction (17): 864, 1307, 1308, 1309, 1550, 1554, 1557, 1558, 1559, 1565, 1566, 2752, 2773, 3374, 3384, 3390, 4146 (0): (3):1378, 1551, Parameters (1): 863,(0)(0)(0): 1 3. Element Format (2): 655, 2740,(0): 2 4. Operations (Basic/Proxy) (2): 1563, 4558(0): (4): 682, 1525, 1553, Jan’s Comments (0): (2): 2049, 2085(0): 2 Total :

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 8 Concluding Remarks Summary of changes: –Rewrote the overview of the RA-OLSR Accomplishments: –100.0% Closed –22-Accept, 0-Defer, 2-Reject, and 7-Counter

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 9 References 1.IEEE P802.11s TM /D1.05 Draft STANDARD for Information Technology - Telecommunications and information exchange between systems - Local and metropolitan area networks - Specific requirements - Part 11: Wireless LAN Medium Access Control (MAC) and Physical Layer (PHY) specifications: Amendment: ESS Mesh Networking 2.Comments Resolution of IEEE P802.11s, 11-07/0023r37 3.A.O Lim et al., “Updated Texts for Clause 11A.7 RA- OLSR,” 11-07/2124r3

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 10 Motion Adopt document 11-07/2124r3 to resolve the following comments related to the RA-OLSR comments: –CID 655, 682, 863, 864, 1307, 1308, 1309, 1378, 1525, 1550, 1551, 1553, 1554, 1557, 1558, 1559, 1563, 1565, 1566, 2049, 2085, 2740, 2752, 2773, 3374, 3384, 3390, 4027, 4146, 4558, 5707 Moved by: Second by: Result (Yes/No/Abstain):

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 11 Backup Slides

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 12 (1) RA-OLSR Clarification/Correction Descriptions: this category is comprised of comments related to unclear explanation, grammatical/inconsistencies, and informative/normative for the RA- OLSR, not its specification. Main issues raised by commenters: –Too many normative statements, the usage of “will,” “can,” and “must” –The information is not appropriate in this sub-clause –“These are transmitted periodically.” does not make sense to specify procedures –Explanation of the fields need to be more precise and clear –Either remove the procedure description in clause 7 or move it to appropriate places –Routing terminologies are not all clearly defined –Explanation of IE processing and forwarding need to be more precise and clear Expected resolutions: –Add informative statements, and replace with may/should/shall –Incorporate the comments of this sub-clause in the appropriate place –Replace this sentence with better one –A submission that improves IE formats ( of P802.11s TM /D1.03) –A submission that improves definitions (11A of P802.11s TM /D1.03) –Reorganize and modify the explanation of IE processing and forwarding

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 13 (2) RA-OLSR Parameters Descriptions: This category is comprised of comments related to parameters and values for RA-OLSR Main issues raised by commenters: –Specify Htime, HELLO interval, etc –The parameter does not appear other than this clause Expected resolution: –Provide specification to the related comments –If this is not defined in this document, define it

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 14 (3) RA-OLSR Element Format Descriptions: This category is comprised of comments related to non-technical issues of the element format specification for RA-OLSR Main issues raised by commenters: –Explain the HELLO, TC, etc –Explain the fields of elements more precise and clear Expected resolution: –Provide explanation and specification to the related comments

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 15 (4) RA-OLSR Operations (Basic/Proxy) Descriptions: This category is comprised of comments related to the technical, content, and fundamental function of the RA-OLSR Main issues raised by commenters: –Explanation of element processing and forwarding need to be more precise and clear when RA-OLSR is applied –Full base diffusion and checksum diffusion –Configurations of portal and interworking are not clearly specified. –Explain HELLO element processing for link sensing –Explain TC element forwarding and processing for multi-radio MPs Expected resolution: –A submission that improves Full base diffusion and checksum diffusion –A submission that improves RA-OLSR when portal is configured –Provide resolution for element processing and forwarding

doc.: IEEE /2125r2 Submission July 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 16 (5) RA-OLSR Jan’s Comments Descriptions: This category contains comments that raise by Jan on the specification of RA-OLSR, not its specification Main issues raised by commenters: –Jan raised to remove RA-OLSR Expected resolution: –RA-OLSR has its own advantages