Words to avoid in good writing

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Words to avoid in good writing Don’t Say That! Words to avoid in good writing

In stories Avoid these words!

A to B a lot a variety of all the hard work paid off appears to be ... basically believes

D - F definitely done etc. (the abbreviation) everybody everyone everyone had a good time extremely feels

goals and purposes (for anything) great great deal like like no other G - L goals and purposes (for anything) great great deal like like no other

M - N many most adjectives and adverbs, most of the first and second person pronouns — we, our, you, your, I, me — except in quotes. nice numerous

P - R passion rather really

S says for attribution, instead of said — or anything else (no stated, commented, smiled, laughed) seems to be several some sort of spirit (The team shows its spirit …) 2006 or 2007 (any year within 12 months) school's name or initials stuff

T - U there is, there are, it is, it was - at the beginning of sentences thing/things this year under the direction of ... unlike any other

various very when asked about ... zeroes in times (10:00) V - Z various very when asked about ... zeroes in times (10:00)

In Quotes “We were like a family” (in sports stories) “It is/was fun” — or any quote that uses “fun” “We have spirit”

In captions/cutlines looking on (whatever that means) left to right — in captions for groups and teams pictured above or below or whatever posing for the camera smiling for the camera

Anywhere and whenever a an the that

The Final Word These are only words, but if you avoid them in your writing, the publication will immediately become better!