Peer-editing USAGE REVISON

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Peer-editing USAGE REVISON Helping your peer to see usage, punctuation, spelling, and typo errors.

Peer-Editing This is where you look at your peers essay and edit for errors they have NOT revised for grammar, usage, capitalization, spelling, format, and typos. You are NOT re-writing their paper. You are closely observing and pointing out to them errors to make the essay easier to read.

Step #1 Read aloud for clarity If confused seek information from Writing w/Power textbook Begin

Step #2 Review Common Essay Chart for Content Re-read essay checking Essay Chart

USAGE ESSAY ERROR CHART Generalization—Never speak in a general way about groups of people. Each individual person has a variety of traits, motivations, strengths, and flaws, and group differences are much more subtle and unimportant than most of us are led to believe. Furthermore, generalizing about people on the basis of their group memberships can be extremely offensive. You should avoid statements about groups or types of people at all costs in your essays. Fix this by saying: seemingly or in my opinion. If you find any error for your U1, correct in PURPLE

USAGE ESSAY ERROR CHART Word choice—slang, over-inflated words, too simple words, repetitive or redundant words, or incorrect word choice for the concept If you find any error for your U2, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U3 Punctuations error--comma error, apostrophe, period, quotations, italics, titles of books, dashes, etc. If you find any error for your U3, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U4 In-text citation and/or works cited format is incorrect. Refer to OWL PURDUE If you find any error for your U4, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U5 Ambiguous sentence structure making comprehension difficult. Be concise. If you find any error for your U5, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U6 Comma splice or run on sentence If you find any error for your U6, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U7 Sentence fragment If you find any error for your U7, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U8 Capitalization or abbreviation error. If you find any error for your U8, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U9 Usage error—grammar error, parallel construction, pronoun reference, subject-verb agreement, typos, misspellings etc. If you find any error for your U9, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART U10 Incorrect MLA format If you find any error for your U10, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART Concluding paragraph does not bring a sense of closure to the essay If you find any error for your C12, correct in PURPLE

CONTENT ESSAY ERROR CHART The last sentence/sentences of the concluding paragraph does not provide a final thought, assertion, or call to action for the essay based on the thesis. If you find any error for your C13, correct in PURPLE

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