Expository Paragraph Write a full Expository paragraph answering the question: Is it fate or immaturity that is to blame for the deaths of Romeo and Juliet?

The Writing Process Collect information Sort through your information and think Decide on your answer to the question Build an argument to support your answer Shape your argument into a paragraph Edit, revise, polish your writing

Collect information Take a look at the question assigned to you: Is it fate or immaturity that is to blame for the deaths of Romeo and Juliet? Create a quick concept map exploring the possible answers. Look through your notes and collect information. Create a list of possible answers. Find and record 6 quotations that relate to either fate (3) or immaturity (3) being responsible for the star-crossed lovers’ deaths.

Sort through your information and think Look over your research. Decide: Is it fate or immaturity? How does it unfold throughout the play and what effect does it have on Plot Character (actions, hubris) Theme (Big Picture)

Build an argument to support your answer Next: Pick either fate or immaturity. Identify two reasons why either fate or immaturity is to blame for the deaths or Romeo and Juliet. Choose evidence – three quotations from the play that best illustrates your answer.

Build an argument Main Idea First reason why your main idea is true Second reason why your main idea is true Quotation to illustrate your point Quotation to illustrate your point Explanation Explanation

Shape your argument into a paragraph This paragraph requires at least 8 sentences! Topic sentence Transition word/phrase Point #1 Proof #1 Explanation #1 Point #2 Proof #2 Explanation #2 Conclusion Identify the main idea First reason why my idea is true Second reason why my idea is true Restate my main idea

Point Proof Explanation Point: identify the effect Proof: give a quotation to illustrate this effect Explanation: explain, in your own words, how the quotation illustrates your main idea.

In Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet interfering with fate has terrible consequences. Firstly, interfering with fate by rushing life’s events could end in tragedy. Friar Lawrence demonstrates this idea by advising Romeo against rushing his relationship with Juliet. Friar Lawrence says, “wisely and slow; they stumble that run fast” (2.3.94). In other words, don’t rush as it will never end well– in Romeo’s case, he and Juliet’s love ends in untimely death. Secondly, making snap decisions and ignoring the time needed to think things through can also have grave consequences. Romeo’s best friend, Mercutio, is murdered by Tybalt (3.1.115). Enraged, Romeo kills Tybalt almost immediately and then says, “O, I am fortune’s fool!” (3.1.135). He realizes that he interfered with fate by making a snap decision and committing murder. As a result, not only is he banished from Verona where his wife is, he is also a wanted criminal. In Romeo and Juliet, interfering with fate leads to terrible consequences.

The Writing Process Collect information Sort through your information and think Decide on your answer to the question Build an argument to support your answer Shape your argument into a paragraph Edit, revise, polish your writing

Collect information Choose either fate or immaturity Skim and scan back through the play Analyze how fate and immaturity play a role – pick 1 Find and record 5 quotations that prove your point