为什么你是万年五分 Presented by: 总统秘书王富贵

今天要解决掉的问题 如何解决 5 分作文的特点 1 2

什么样的作文能得五 Nowadays, advertisement has become a very useful method to promote the products or goods. Some people think if you pay more money on advertisement, your products will have a big sale regardless the quality. Others, on the other hand, think that real quality will eventually win the competition. I totally agree with the latter opinion. Firstly, advertisement is very expensive to put on newspaper, radio or even TV and money should be used to improve the quality. If you put all your money on advertisement, you must have no money to pay for technological innovation and if this situation happen, your goods will be far behind other competitors. Secondly, even advertisement boosts your revenue, the clients will eventually find your products are nothing but advertisement. They will know the trick and never buy your products any more. Last but not least, on 15th of March of every year which is the Day of consumers’ rights, the products with bad quality will be caught and exposed to the public, at that time no matter how much you pay to the CCTV, no one will buy the products. It’s stink.

什么样的作文能得五 Certainly, advertisement has its own function sometimes. It can absorb more consumers and convince them to buy the products. For example, if the consumer is looking for some good IELTS teacher, so as a good teacher, I will pay Hujiang to put my big advertisement on the front page, so I can earn money. Moreover, the advertisement is very very useful when selling some public goods, because people always need those goods. One advertisement will attract more and more people at one time. But it does not mean advertisement is invincible. The more money it earns, the bad impacts it spreads. In conclusion, the advertisement is not that useful as we think. Quality is the most important thing in our economic life. Besides, good transportation, good service and cheap price are also vital to customer. Let’s work together to improve our socialism economy and contribute our power to our great mother land.

问题在哪儿？ Nowadays, advertisement has become a very useful method to promote the products or goods. Some people think if you pay more money on advertisement, your products will have a big sale regardless the quality. Others, on the other hand, think that real quality will eventually win the competition. I totally agree with the latter opinion. Firstly, advertisement is very expensive to put on newspaper, radio or even TV and money should be used to improve the quality. If you put all your money on advertisement, you must have no money to pay for technological innovation and if this situation happen, your goods will be far behind other competitors. Secondly, even advertisement boosts your revenue, the clients will eventually find your products are nothing but advertisement. They will know the trick and never buy your products any more. Last but not least, on 15th of March of every year which is the Day of consumers’ rights, the products with bad quality will be caught and exposed to the public, at that time no matter how much you pay to the CCTV, no one will buy the products. It’s stink.

问题在哪儿？ Certainly, advertisement has its own function sometimes. It can absorb more consumers and convince them to buy the products. For example, if the consumer is looking for some good IELTS teacher, so as a good teacher, I will pay Hujiang to put my big advertisement on the front page, so I can earn money. Moreover, the advertisement is very very useful when selling some public goods, because people always need those goods. One advertisement will attract more and more people at one time. But it does not mean advertisement is invincible. The more money it earns, the bad impacts it spreads. In conclusion, the advertisement is not that useful as we think. Quality is the most important thing in our economic life. Besides, good transportation, good service and cheap price are also vital to customer. Let’s work together to improve our socialism economy and contribute our power to our great mother land.

问题在这里 1. Academic 的要求： –1. you 是不可以用的。 We, I 第一人称慎用 –2. 用词的级别不可以是日常白话词 2. 用词的准确度，很多词我们不会用 比如 teenager ， rights 等 3. 没有口号 4. 结尾不能出现新的或无关的东西 5. 语气太强烈

Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, whole others do not. What are your opinions on this?

There are many different views on the issue of fast food. Some people believe that this kind of food has a positive role to play in the world because of its convenience and low cost; however, I would argue that it is harmful both to the people who eat it and to society as a whole. There are two main reasons for this.

Firstly, it is a well-known fact that eating too much fast food is very unhealthy. Foods such as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips contain much fat and salt, which cause big health problems like high blood pressure, obesity and heart disease. Although I certainly agree that fast food is both cheap and convenient, the illnesses it causes when we get older are very expensive and it is the taxpayer who often has to pay for this treatment.

In addition to this, many fast food restaurants advertise to children in order to influence their future eating habits. The McDonald’s clown is a good example of this kind of advertising. Ronald McDonald’s bright clothes and smile are clearly designed to attract the attention of children, who then push their parents to take them to McDonalds. I believe the restaurant does this because it feels that children who grow up eating in McDonalds are likely to become lifelong customers. Moreover, McDonalds also provides playground and holds children’s birthday parties to get busy parents through the door.

In conclusion, I once again state my view that food has a negative effect on our lives because of the health problems it causes and the way that fast food chains try to change the eating habits of children.

Thanks!