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2. 审题 体裁 : 时态 : 人称 : 要点 : 说明、议论 现在时 第一、第三人称 Part 1 Part 2 午睡调 查情况 你的看法 1 、大部分同学有午睡习惯 2 、大概 12 ： 30 开始午睡 3 、通常睡 30 分钟 4 、通常在家中午睡 5 、认为午睡有好处

3.  ① Most students take a nap after lunch. ② They often begin it at 12:30 and ③ it often takes about half an hour. ④ Most of them sleep at home. ⑤ They think that taking a nap after lunch is good for them. 1 、大部分同学 有午睡习惯 2 、大概 12 ： 30 开始午睡 3 、通常睡 30 分 钟 4 、通常在家中 午睡 5 、认为午睡有 好处 It usually begins lasts for prefer to, which is more comfortable. are in the habit of taking benefits them a lot.

4.  Most students are in the habit of taking a nap after lunch. It usually begins at 12:30 and lasts for half an hour. Most of them prefer to sleep at home, which is more comfortable. They all think that taking a nap after lunch benefits them a lot. 1. 使用较高级 的词汇 2. 使用较丰 富的句式

5. Most students have formed the habit of taking a nap after lunch. It seems that home is the best place for a nap after lunch, where students can take a nap without being disturbed. Taking a nap for about 30 minutes is the most popular choice among my classmates. Usually, their nap begins at 12:30. Meanwhile, most students hold the view that taking a nap after lunch is beneficial to them. 1 、大部分同学 有午睡习惯 2 、大概 12 ： 30 开始午睡 3 、通常睡 30 分 钟 4 、通常在家中 午睡 5 、认为午睡有 好处 高分技巧： 1 、高级词汇 / 常用短语 2 、恰当、多变的句型 3 、适当的衔接词 4 、恰倒好处的细节添加 5 、贵在简洁

6. 你的看法  Well, in my opinion, it’s very necessary for us to take a nap after lunch and we will feel better in the afternoon if we do like that. And the survey shows that most students know how to learn more efficiently. In a word, we should not only learn the knowledge, but also learn the method of learning. 内容支离破碎， 结尾偏题

7. 你的看法  I’m also in favor of the opinion. To begin with, a nap after lunch can certainly make up for our sleeping time. Moreover, with a nap after lunch, we can save our energy so as to concentrate on our studies in the afternoon instead of feeling sleepy. In brief, I think a nap after lunch is of great importance for us students. 短语、句式丰富， 结构严谨，结尾点题

8. Most students have formed the habit of taking a nap after lunch. It seems that home is the best place for a nap after lunch, where students can take a nap without being disturbed. Taking a nap for about 30 minutes is the most popular choice among my classmates. Usually, their nap begins at 12:30. Meanwhile, most students hold the view that taking a nap after lunch is beneficial to them. I’m also in favor of the opinion. To begin with, a nap after lunch can certainly make up for our sleeping time. Moreover, with a nap after lunch, we can save our energy so as to concentrate on our studies in the afternoon instead of feeling sleepy. In brief, I think a nap after lunch is of great importance for us students.