2Poem SummaryThe poem is about a visit MacCaig makes to an ill relative in hospital.The opening stanzas (1-4) describe the poet’s journey through the hospital.He then reaches ‘Ward 7’ where he finds the frail woman he has come to see.The poem allows us an insight into the narrator’s feelings and we also gain an understanding of how ill the patient is.
3Stanza OneHow does the poet create a clear sense of setting in the first stanza?Why has he chosen to describe the smell?What is the effect of the colour choice MacCaig has used for the corridors?(synaesthesia) The hospital smell Combs my nostrils As they go bobbing along Green and yellow corridors (synecdoche)
4Synecdoche Synaesthesia Using a part to refer to thewhole.For example – he gothimself some new wheelsWe know this means a carBut it only refers to thewheels so it isSYNECDOCHESynaesthesiaConfusion of the senses.When one senseexperiences something itelicits a response inanother sense.For example - whensomeone hears certainsounds they might seecolour.
5Stanza Two What mood is created in this stanza? What seems a corpse Is trundled into a lift and vanishesHeavenwardsEnjambmentWhat mood is created in this stanza?Explain and pick out words that you think convey this mood.Discuss the effect of the enjambment.
6Free VerseThe poem does not have a set rhyme scheme or verse structure.Why do you think MacCaig decided to adopt free verse in this poem?It is also written in first person.Why is this an effective stance?
7Stanza Three I will not feel, I will not Feel, until I have to. After the previous stanzaswhich describe the setting,this verse allows us tounderstand the speaker’sfeelings.Looking at the structure of this verse, comment on how tension is created.What is the effect of thefinal line?
8Stanza Four In this stanza the poet creates a feeling of activity and purpose.What does he feelabout the nurses?In what way do they provide a contrast?(Structure)Nurses walk lightly, swiftlyhere and up and down and theretheir slender waists miraculouslycarrying their burden,of so much pain, somany deaths, their eyesstill clear afterso many farewells(repetition)
9Journey These first four verses move through the corridors of the hospitalas the speaker headstowards his destination.How has this sense of movement been achieved?
10Ward 7. Caesura – a pause in a line of poetry. What is the effect of the (complete) first line of this stanza?This is a turning point in the poem.Explain.
11Stanza Five‘White cave of forgetfulness’ ‘A withered hand/trembles on its stalk’ ‘glass fang’ ‘distance shrinks’ ‘the distance of pain which neither she nor I/can cross.’
12Stanza Six What do you notice about the viewpoint? The poet is described as the ‘black figure’.What is significant about this?Explain why you think he ‘clumsily rises’?
13Oxymoron – a phrase containing contradictory terms ‘almost finished’, ‘dress trousers’, ‘pretty ugly’Comment on the importance of the oxymoron in the final line of the poem.How has the speaker’s stance changed from the start of the poem?What feeling is the reader left with at the end of the poem?