2 Chunking to ImitateModel: Then he turned and stood still with the sun at his back and studied the water again.Chunked: Then he turned / and stood still/ with the sun at his back/ and studied the water again.Imitation:
3 Chunking to ImitateModel: He was in the bushes in moments scattering the birds grabbing branches stripping them to fill his mouth with berries.Chunked: He was in the bushes in moments / scattering the birds / grabbing branches / stripping them to fill his mouth with berries.Imitation:
4 Unscrambling and trotted back around the lake Then he picked up the where the fire had burned down spear and bow andto glowing coals trotted back around thethen he picked up lake to his shelter,the spear and the bow where the fire hadto his shelter, burned down to glowingcoals.
5 Unscrambling – cued with punctuation until it stopped wiggling, He held the fish againstat what he had done. the sky until it stoppedHe held the fish wiggling, held it andagainst the sky looked to the sky andand felt his throat tighten, felt his throat tighten,swell, swell, and fill with prideand fill with pride at what he had done.held it and looked to the sky
6 Unscrambling looked inside He walked to the he walked to the next cabin next cabin, lookedhuddled in the corner inside, and saw aand saw a body body huddled in the corner.
7 Unscrambling to imitate Model: When he awakened the sun was cooking the inside of his mouth and had dried his tongue to leather.List: Imitation:the sun was cooking When he awakened theand had dried his back sun was cooking thelike sandpaper nape of his neck andwhen he awakened had dried his back likethe nape of his neck sandpaper.
8 Unscrambling to imitate: your turn Model: Sitting alone in the dark, his leg aching, some mosquitoes finding him again, he started crying.List: Imitation:his legs achingrunning ahead of the packhe started wheezingsome mud splattering his t-shirt