1. 3 Favourite Narratives 1. Hunger Games 2. Cherub- Recruit 3. Percy Jackson- The Lightning Thief

2. The events 1. Billy becomes friends with a guy named Marcus 2. Billy`s brother loses a lot of money from betting 3. Billy gets fired from his newspaper job for stealing milk 4. Marcus gets killed in a mine collapse 5. Billy ends up working with Marcus`s brother Wayne Conflict HUMAN VS. NATURE- Marcus and Billy against the mine

3. Where: pour parts of England, Billy`s house, Marcus`s house, Mine, Newspaper store and an English neighborhood When: 1969, during the morning, during the day, during the night and before and after 5:00pm The days are cloudy and rainy The days are cloudy and rainy because it goes with the moods of dark and depressed The moods are dark and depressed because Kes, Mr. Jones and Marcus died The mood is cheerful when Billy become friends with Marcus but, the cheerful mood goes away when Marcus dies

4. Main Characters: Billy Caspar and Marcus Carrick Billy Caspar- poor, un-educated, small, neglected, 15, leaving school, under-fed, thief, no aspirations Jud – older brother, big, bully, tough, strong, gambles, mean, disrespectful Phillip Jones- in charge of mine, 30, tall, strong, kind, hard-working Marcus Carrick- 15, small, nice, pour, un-educated, curious, responsible Ms. Caspar- mother, busy, poor, not married, tough, doesn`t do things for the kids Mr. Brownlow- in charge of newspaper store, old, angry, lazy, sells things Mr. Erikson- milk man, nice, strong, 35, smart Wayne Carrick- small, poor, 14, doesn`t give up, kind, joker, Marcus`s younger brother

5. The mood is very sad and at points joyful. It is sad when Marcus and Mr. Jones die. It is joyful when he becomes friends with Marcus and sees Marcus` brother at the mine. The feeling is surprised when you here the ending,. You think many different thoughts when you here the ending. The feeling is shocked when Marcus dies. You may have thought he was going to live.

6. The theme for my story is friendship. I really wanted the theme to be friendship because in Kes Billy was lonely and didn`t have any friends except for his bird Kes. Except in my story he becomes friends with Marcus. Marcus and Billy become great friends. Who knows maybe Billy will become friends with Marcus` brother Wayne

7. My story was a third person narrative where you use words like he and Billy. If the story was in first person you would use words like I and me. Some of Billy`s inner thoughts in this story were what if he got caught for stealing the milk and how am I going to make enough money for all the money Jud lost.

8. 1. Simile- Mr. Erikson was as nice as a hot summer day. 2. VSS- very short sentence- He`s a miner. 3. Sentence openers- Unfortunely,

9. Using spell check on Microsoft Word My mom read my story and gave me feed back My dad helped me with proper grammar