1. 1 W riting Body Paragraphs “Readiness is all." (William Shakespeare)William Shakespeare

2. 2 HOW IS THE BODY PARAGRAPH DIFFERENT? Of the three paragraph types-- introductory, body and concluding-- the body is probably the most difficult to write. WHY?

3. 3 Because... This is where you actually have to use reason and logic. In other words, if you don’t think before writing, you will more than likely repeat yourself, go off topic, or not write enough. (Errors which more than likely will cause you to fail.)

4. 4 As a result, Writing body paragraphs takes more planning and time than the introductory or concluding paragraph.

5. 5 Before you write a body paragraph, you need to make sure... That you have adequate and specific examples. (Article, Graph, Chart, etc…) or A short story (Novel, Play, Etc…) to back up or illustrate your thinking. and That your ideas are in the right RESECC. order.

6. 6 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. R – stands for Reason. Here you state what you’ll be talking about in the paragraph. It only needs to be one line, just enough to specify what you're talking about. E - stands for Explain. Here you will explain your Reason, giving the reader more information about what it is. One line will do here, but two is more beneficial for your mark. S - stands for Support with Example. This is where your paragraph comes to the crunch. You will have to use a real example. If you’re Responding to Literature, you'll need a real quote. If you're doing a formal writing essay you'll be able to get away with a looser interpretation of the word 'real'. You will be judged on the content of your quote and how you use it to back up your argument. E - stands for Elaborate. Here you discuss how your example backs up your argument. Two lines is a good bet here, the more you show how much you understand your example the better. Feel free to start it off with, 'This shows how..." or "Here we see..." You shouldn't get marked down particularly, but you'll get marked up for a more original link. C- stands for Consider. Here you consider your opposition. This tells the reader that you are a well- informed person who can see BOTH sides of the issue and STILL CHOOSE the original position. Through logic and evidence, prove why the opposition’s arguments are faulty or incorrect. C - stands for Clincher. This is where you provide a memorable, effective closing statement for this paragraph.

7. 7 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. R – stands for Reason. Here you state what you’ll be talking about in the paragraph. It only needs to be one line, just enough to specify what you're talking about.

8. 8 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. E - stands for Explain. Here you will elaborate on your reason, giving the reader more information about what it is. One line will do here, but two is more beneficial for your mark.

9. 9 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. S - stands for Support with Example. This is where your paragraph comes to the crunch. You will have to use a real example. If you’re Responding to Literature, you'll need a real quote. You can easily start a sentence with “This can be seen when ______ says…” If you're doing a formal writing essay you'll be able to get away with a looser interpretation of the word 'real'. You will be judged on the content of your quote and how you use it to back up your argument.

10. 10 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. E - stands for Elaborate. Here you discuss how your example backs up your argument. Two lines is a good bet here, the more you show how much you understand your example the better. Feel free to start it off with, 'This shows how..." or "Here we see..." You shouldn't get marked down particularly, but you'll get marked up for a more original link.

11. 11 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. C- stands for Consider. Here you consider your opposition. This tells the reader that you are a well- informed person who can see BOTH sides of the issue and STILL CHOOSE the original position. Through logic and evidence, prove why the opposition’s arguments are faulty or incorrect.

12. 12 This is the format for the body paragraph which should include about 6 to 9 sentences and be of about 100 words in length. C - stands for Clincher. This is where you provide a memorable, effective closing statement for this paragraph.

13. 13 Let’s say that the topic is, “Should the New Zealand Government invest money in roads ?” We come up with three reasons a. Traffic Jams are causing unforeseen problems, b. The roads are in disrepair and need work, c. Cars are bad for the environment When you are thinking about what to write, you don’t want to use a lot of words. You just want to jot down ideas. Let’s work on reason a.

14. 14 After thinking about, it we come with the following ideas.... Problems for Principals Law Enforcement Family Employers

15. 15 But how does it cause problems for all these groups? Problems for Principals Law Enforcement Family Employers

16. 16 But how does it cause problems for all these groups? People get to work late and lose hours for productivity. Police must monitor and direct Traffic Jams. Traffic Jams cause problems like pollution, accidents, and road rage. Parents are late picking up kids from school, preparing dinner, and/or spending quality time with their children. Believe it or not with these few ideas you can write a good body paragraph. Problems for Principals Law Enforcement Family Employers

17. Created by José J. Gonzalez, Jr. 17 (REASON) New Zealand roads are seriously overcrowded. (EXPLAIN) Most people own a car and use that car everyday. This has lead to crowded streets and more traffic jams. This increased traffic is having a negative effect on a number of people in our society. (SUPPORT W/EXAMPLE) A government report released in 2006 showed that “the increased ownership of cars has led to a 20% increase in traffic jams over the last 10 years.” (ELABORATE) Police must monitor and direct Traffic Jams; traffic Jams cause problems like pollution, accidents, and road rage. Also, people get to work late and lose hours for productivity. This means later hours and/or rushed final products. Finally, traffic means parents are late picking up kids from school, not preparing dinner, and/or missing quality time with their children. (CONSIDER) Some people feel that traffic jams and overcrowding is a result of poor driving skill, but the data clearly shows the number of vehicles on roadways has made a greater impact than lack of driving ability.. (CLINCHER) New Zealand roads are ridiculously overcrowded!

18. Created by José J. Gonzalez, Jr. Spring 2002 18 Example of Body paragraph Vehicle telephones should not be made illegal because they are very convenient. We use vehicle telephones for emergency situations. For example, in case of an automobile accident, we use vehicle phone to call the police department, an emergency ambulance or friends who can help. Another example pertains to a personal experience. Last week I was driving around town, running errands when the nurse in my son’s school called me and informed me about my son’s fever. I was able to pick up my son and rush him to the doctor without delay. This proves that vehicle telephones are convenient for emergency situations.

19. Created by José J. Gonzalez, Jr. Spring 2002 19 Example of body paragraph The border patrol agents should not be so harsh with illegal immigrants. The Monitor reported several cases of deaths from drowning. These cases were the results of harsh treatment by the border patrol agents. One death was caused by agents when they were trying to discourage several men on a raft from entering the US territory: the agents lowered their helicopter too close to the illegal immigrant's raft, causing the raft to overturn. In the other case reported, agents illegally detained and deported a Rio Grande man even though he told them that he had documentation. He drowned trying to return to his home. Both these deaths could have been avoided if the border patrol agents had not been so severe in their treatment.