1. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ Creative Commons Licensing You are free: to Share — to copy, distribute and transmit the work to Remix — to adapt the work Under the following conditions: Attribution — You must attribute the work in the following manner:  This work is based on an original work of the Core Knowledge® Foundation made available through licensing under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. This does not in any way imply that the Core Knowledge Foundation endorses this work. Noncommercial — You may not use this work for commercial purposes. Share Alike — If you alter, transform, or build upon this work, you may distribute the resulting work only under the same or similar license to this one. With the understanding that: For any reuse or distribution, you must make clear to others the license terms of this work. The best way to do this is with a link to this web page: http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ 1

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6. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ Name the Purpose 1.I see three spelling errors. 2.I see the student is using ee for the ea sound three times, in the words, “beet,” “meet,” and “streat.” 3.The first sentence in the paragraph is a topic sentence. 4.I think that the student ran out of time because the hand writing gets sloppier and the last sentence has no period. 5.I see how the specific focus on vocabulary in the read- alouds supports the child’s use of similar vocabulary within his writing piece. For example, the word “democracy” is used in writing in a similar way and in a similar sentence to what was in the read-aloud. 6.Obviously, this student has not been taught grammar. 6 Description of Evidence Interpretation Connection Evaluation

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8. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ Domino Share Decide who is going first. Introduce yourself to your colleagues at your table. Each person should share your:  Name;  Role; and  One point relevant to the particular share. First person will point to the person who will go second. Continue this pattern Stop when you have finished the round. 8

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12. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ I Do: THINK What do you think of the evidence? What might the child think is important when writing? What do you think the child has been taught? 12

13. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ I Do: CONNECT How does the work connect to the bigger idea? How is this work evidence of reading and writing working together? 13

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16. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ We Do: THINK What do you think of the evidence? What might the child think is important when writing? What do you think the child has been taught? 16

17. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ We Do: CONNECT Where does the work connect to the bigger idea? How is this work evidence of reading and writing working together? 17

18. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ You Do Round 1: “See” What evidence do you see? Round 2: “Think” What do you think of the evidence? Focus your interpretation: What does the child thinks is important?; What is happening instructionally? Round 3: “Connect” How is this work evidence of reading and writing working together? 18

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21. EngageNY.org ©2012 Core Knowledge Foundation. This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ www.creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-sa/3.0/ Domino Share: CONNECT Each person should share one way you can connect, from Jason’s work, to the idea that reading and writing work together. 21

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