1. Format for Writing Poem Mrs. Phelps’s Hello Poem Editing and Revising Hello Poem Hello Poem Requirements

2. Hello! __________________ Write your first name __________, __________, __________, __________ List four strong, precise adjectives that describe you Brother/Sister of…OR Son/Daughter of ________________________________________ (Choose one) Who loves __________________________, and ___________________. (Write 2 phrases) Who feels __________________________, and ___________________. (Write 2 phrases) Who fears __________________________, and ___________________. (Write 2 phrases) Who would love to see __________________, and __________________. (Write 2 phrases) Who respects people who _________________________, and ___________________. (Write 2 phrases) _______________ Last name

3. Hello! Angie dependable, kind-hearted, thoughtful, gracious Wife of Jacob Who loves a restful night at home playing board games with her children and a full day swimming at a waterpark Who feels relaxed when reading a romantic drama book and energized after an extended conversation with an great friend Who fears snakes and alligators at the zoo and being alone in a car in an unknown place Who would like to see what my children will be like when they grow up and the statue of liberty in New York City Who respects people who serves others without a thank you and has passion for something and acts on it Phelps

4. Hello!~Edit/Revise *Box the 4 adjectives in line 2….double check that each is an adjective…make changes as needed *Circle two words that could be changed to something more descriptive…….make changes *Underline pronouns in lines 4-7 (words used in place of your name). Be sure each is 3 rd person: he/she; him/her; etc. *Check lines 4-8 to be sure each includes phrases….also check that verbs are all same tense…make needed corrections (For example: do all of your verbs end in –ing or –ed?) *Make sure each line begins with a capital letter…make corrections *Check that lines 4-7 end in a period….make corrections. *Be sure items in a series are separated with commas….make corrections