1. Spivey Patterns Creating more “colorful” sentences NOUN-PART Patterns -ED

2. Who/What + action + -ED Example: –The mailman carried the mail, his hands tired from the hard work. Let’s Try Together! Now you try in your Writer’s Notebook

3. -who/what + action + action + -ing Example: –As I sat in my living room, I read my book and began to sleep, my eyes closed as I dreamt about vacation. Let’s Try Together! Now you try in your Writer’s Notebook

4. who/what + action + noun-part + -ed Example: –The man fell walked away in anger, his fists clenched tightly as he stormed off. Let’s Try Together! Now you try in your Writer’s Notebook

5. LET’S PRACTICE WHO or WHAT + ACTION + LY, + NOUN-part+ ING WHO or WHAT + ACTION, + NOUN- part+ -ED.

6. Writing a Paragraph Putting it Together Writer’s Notebook SENTENCE 1: WHO or WHAT + ACTION + LY, + NOUN-part+ ING. SENTENCE 2: WITH/WITHOUT/BY+ WHO or WHAT + ACTION + WHERE. SENTENCE 3: WHEN, + WHO or WHAT, RENAMER GROUP, + ACTION. SENTENCE 4: -lNG, WHO OR WHAT + ACTION + ACTION +ACTION GROUP 3. Sample on next slide

7. SAMPLE WHO + ACTION + L Y, + NOUN-part + ING. The thief opened the safe carefully, his hands shaking as he worked. WITH/WITHOUT/BY + WHO + ACTION + WHERE. Without hesitation, he turned the combination knob to the right and left. WHEN, + WHO, RENAMER GROUP, After he heard the tumbler lock into place, the thief, a first class criminal with years of experience, opened the safe door. -ING + who + action+action+action Hurrying to finish, he pulled out all the money and jewels, shoved them into a large cloth bag, and left through the window.