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2. In three weeks I will design an information poster with 10 colorful pictures created by me in English and Pashto about how the Afghan chiefs can cook cheap (Anna, 2010, Para 5) different types of spicy, sour, and hot food (Davis, 1957, Para1) to help the restaurants in Kabul to reduce the prices of the food they sell (Numbeo, 2012).Anna, 2010, Para 5Davis, 1957, Para1Numbeo, 2012 A*ABCPASSFAIL 01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaningA*ABCPASSFAIL 02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errorsA*ABCPASSFAIL 03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-levelA*ABCPASSFAIL 04. Specific Output: A clear product for gradingA*ABCPASSFAIL 05. Viable Output: Doable before deadlineA*ABCPASSFAIL 06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposalA*ABCPASSFAIL 07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgentA*ABCPASSFAIL 08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantifiedA*ABCPASSFAIL 09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needsA*ABCPASSFAIL 10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nounsA*ABCPASSFAIL 11. Original Input: Use of elements of originalityA*ABCPASSFAIL 12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative supportA*ABCPASSFAIL G01Complete Student Name #01 Mr. Jaime10-Nov-13 ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only] Use the “Short Cuts” file to correct this. Use the “Original Inputs” file to correct this. Use the “Short Cuts” file to correct this. See comments on your references slide 42%

4. Problem Statement 1 Details (Numbeo, 2013) Numbeo. (2009-2013, April 13). Food Prices in Afghanistan. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from Numbeo: http://www.numbeo.com/food- prices/country_result.jsp?country=Afghanistanhttp://www.numbeo.com/food- Urgency (Anna,2010, Para 5) Souza, A. (2010, November). Brief 51: Rising food prices and coping strategies – household level evidence from Afghanistan. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from Ifad: http://www.ifad.org/drd/agriculture/51.htm Theory (Davis, 2013) Divis, J. (1957, March 12). Hot Spices and Spicy Blends - Information and Spice Variations. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from The pice house: http://www.thespicehouse.com/spices-by-list/hot-spices-and-spicy- blends Wrong date in citation Dead link This does not look like a theory Please submit a Research Writing Showcase that shows me the keywords you used and how you identified the APA information. An example file is available on Slideshare. The link is on your Updates page. See how, in APA, which titles are in quote marks and which titles are in italics. Do not use the space bar to format the indention of paragraphs. Use the paragraph formatting commands in the top menu. The in-text citations should link to the reference. The reference should show the short website address, but the hyperlink should open to the article, not to the homepage.

5. In three weeks I will design an information poster with 5 pictures created by me in English and Pashto about three ways of enhancing children learning to enable junior high school teachers (Resource center, 2012) in Afghanistan, so that they can improve their lecture delivery (Amara,2012, Para 3) by using textbooks, photo caption, and visual strategies (Sieff, 2012).Resource center, 2012Amara,2012, Para 3Sieff, 2012 A*ABCPASSFAIL 01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaningA*ABCPASSFAIL 02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errorsA*ABCPASSFAIL 03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-levelA*ABCPASSFAIL 04. Specific Output: A clear product for gradingA*ABCPASSFAIL 05. Viable Output: Doable before deadlineA*ABCPASSFAIL 06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposalA*ABCPASSFAIL 07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgentA*ABCPASSFAIL 08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantifiedA*ABCPASSFAIL 09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needsA*ABCPASSFAIL 10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nounsA*ABCPASSFAIL 11. Original Input: Use of elements of originalityA*ABCPASSFAIL 12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative supportA*ABCPASSFAIL G01Complete Student Name #02 Mr. Jaime10-Nov-13 ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only] 75% Use the “Short Cuts” file to correct this. See comments on your references slide

6. Problem Statement 2 Details ( Save the Children, 2012) Save the Children. (2012, March 5). Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://resourcecentre.savethechildren.se/: http://resourcecentre.savethechildren.se/start/countries/afghanistan Urgency (Sieff, 2012) Sieff, K. (2012, December 27). Afghan children flee homes for the chance to learn. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://www.smh.com.au/: http://www.smh.com.au/world/afghan-children-flee-homes-for-the- chance-to-learn-20121226-2bwfn.html http://www.smh.com.au/world/afghan-children-flee-homes-for-the- chance-to- Theory (Amara, 2012, Para 3) Amara, F. M. (2012, June 27). Theories and Practical Steps for Delivering Effective Lectures. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://www.omicsonline.org/: http://www.omicsonline.org/2161-0711/2161-0711-2-158.php Dead link Please submit a Research Writing Showcase that shows me the keywords you used and how you identified the APA information. An example file is available on Slideshare. The link is on your Updates page. See how, in APA, which titles are in quote marks and which titles are in italics. Do not use the space bar to format the indention of paragraphs. Use the paragraph formatting commands in the top menu. The in-text citations should link to the reference. The reference should show the short website address, but the hyperlink should open to the article, not to the homepage. Invalid link Dead link

7. In three weeks I will design an information poster with 9 colorful pictures created by me in English to rebuild the health care system in Afghanistan (R. Acerra,, Iskyan, Qureshi,, & Sharma, 2009, Para 1) such as by improving the number of doctors, clinics, and hospitals (Hansen, et al., 2008), so that the Afghan people can easily get access to those places and can get a good treatment (BMJ, 1998).R. Acerra,, Iskyan, Qureshi,, & Sharma, 2009, Para 1Hansen, et al., 2008BMJ, 1998 A*ABCPASSFAIL 01. Logic: Easily understood and logically clear meaningA*ABCPASSFAIL 02. Clarity: One complete sentence with no errorsA*ABCPASSFAIL 03. Difficulty: A topic that can be at college-levelA*ABCPASSFAIL 04. Specific Output: A clear product for gradingA*ABCPASSFAIL 05. Viable Output: Doable before deadlineA*ABCPASSFAIL 06. Beneficiary: Exactly who will benefit from proposalA*ABCPASSFAIL 07. Urgency: Beneficiary need is convincingly urgentA*ABCPASSFAIL 08. Specific Beneficiary: Beneficiary need is quantifiedA*ABCPASSFAIL 09. Relevance: What beneficiaries must do to meet needsA*ABCPASSFAIL 10. Objective Concepts: Measurable verbs and nounsA*ABCPASS 11. Original Input: Use of elements of originalityA*ABCPASSFAIL 12. Proof (Bonus): Use of authoritative supportA*ABCPASSFAIL G01Complete Student Name #03 Mr. Jaime10-Nov-13 ASSESSMENT RUBRIC : STATEMENT OF THE RESEARCH PROBLEM A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only] 58% Use the “Short Cuts” file to correct this. See comments on your references slide Use the “Short Cuts” file to correct this. Use the “Original Inputs” file to correct this.

8. Problem Statement 3 Details ( Hansen, et al., 2008 ) Hansen, P. M., Peters, D. H., Niayesh, H., P, L., Singh, Dwivedi, V., et al. (2008, April 24). Measuring and managing progress in the establishment of basic health services: the Afghanistan health sector balanced scorecard. Retrieved November 30, 2013, from http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/: http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/hpm.931/abstract Urgency ( R. Acerra,, Iskyan, Qureshi,, & Sharma, 2009 ) R. Acerra,, J., Iskyan, K., Qureshi,, Z. A., & Sharma, R. K. (2009). Rebuilding the health care system in Afghanistan: an overview of primary care and emergency services. International Journal of Emergency Medicine, pp 77-82,. Theory (BMJ, 1998) BMJ. (1998). The importance of theories in health care. British Medical Journal, 1007-1010. No live link Please submit a Research Writing Showcase that shows me the keywords you used and how you identified the APA information. An example file is available on Slideshare. The link is on your Updates page. See how, in APA, which titles are in quote marks and which titles are in italics. Do not use the space bar to format the indention of paragraphs. Use the paragraph formatting commands in the top menu. The in-text citations should link to the reference. The reference should show the short website address, but the hyperlink should open to the article, not to the homepage. No live link Abstracts are not recommended for reference use Why change font?

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