1. Slow Way Home: Unit II Lesson 1 Slow Way Home Chapter 5 Screenplay Outline Milinda Jay, Ph. D

2. For teachers only Please read notes on slides 3,9,11,13,21,22,23,37,38,40 Have Unit 2 lesson 1 Word Document storyboard ready to hand out on slide 22 Have Unit 2 lesson I Word Document screenplay outline ready to hand out on slide 27 Be sure you are ready to story board your relative’s story and place your story on a slide outline. Homework assessment on slide 40

3. Retell what happened In Chapter 4 of Slow Way Home Each students take a turn saying one sentence about what happened in Chapter 5.

4. Now, predict what might happen in Chapter 5.

5. Read aloud Chapter 5, Slow Way Home What does the lady Senator think of Brandon? His mother? If you were directing a movie version of Slow Way Home, who would you cast as Brandon’s mama?

6. Today’s Writing Screenwriting

7. Sunshine State Standard Subject Area: Reading/Language Arts Strand: Writing Applications Standard 1: Creative LA.910.4.1.1 The student will write in a variety of expressive and reflective forms that use a range of appropriate strategies and specific narrative techniques, employ literary devices, and sensory description

8. Teacher Component To create a unique learning community by writing with your students To model the process of writing for students with the understanding that teachers have to write drafts, too! To donate to the learning community by sharing your experiences and those of your family/friends through memoir

9. Teacher storytelling Your teacher will now read you one of the stories she has written based on a family or friend story.

10. Now, take out the stories You gathered from your relative or family friend after the last lesson.

11. Tell your relative’s story Read what you have written to your partner. After reading what you have written, tell any details that you think should be added.

12. Take Five Ok, your generation is a visual one. You were raised on movies and tv shows in a way that your parents and grandparents were not. When you think about stories, you usually see them rather than hear them. You see them as they might appear in a movie or on television.

13. Take Five Take five minutes and look over your stories. Decide which would make the best short movie or television program. Your teacher will do the same thing and share her results with you in just a few minutes.

14. Teacher Model Your teacher will now tell you which of the stories she has gathered from her relatives, or from her own experience, that she thinks would make the best movie and why.

15. Storyboard it!

16. What is a Storyboard? Once someone has a concept for a movie (that is a main idea about what the movie will be about), the screenwriter storyboards his movie.

17. To storyboard Is to draw or tell the main pictures of the movie in sequence like this:

18. Storyboard

19. Original Jaws storyboard (jawscollector.com)

20. Is this Love? Storyboard Copyright 2008 sogno films

21. Ok, next, you will take 20-30 minutes and try drawing your storyboard draw your story in five pictures. You may use the handout and draw small pictures, or You may use five individual sheets of paper

22. Remember you aren't trying to draw perfect pictures. Your goal is to imagine the five main scenes of your story, and rough sketch them, Then label your rough sketches. Draw with pencil

23. Which Five? One way of deciding which five slides to include is to decide how your story might look if you wrote it out as a movie.

24. Almost every movie You will ever watch has this basic outline: Act I: The first thirty minutes set up the action, introduce you to the characters and prepare you for the first plot point which happens at the end of act I.

25. For example: In Shrek, Act I, or the set up, introduces you to the characters by putting you into the middle of the action: the Fairy Tale people are being sent away. Donkey gets away.

26. Plot Point any incident that hooks into the action and spins it in another direction In Shrek, the first plot point happens after Donkey meets Shrek. They decide to go rescue the princess. This is the first plot point.

27. Syd Field’s Screenplay Outline Act 1 set up Act 2 confrontation Act 3 resolution Sets up the action; establishes relationships 30 minutes Main character encounters obstacles that keep him/her from achieving his/her dramatic need 60 minutes Loose ends of story are tied up 30 minutes Plot Point 1 Moves the action in a new direction Plot Point 2 Moves the action in a new direction Plot point: any incident that hooks into the action and spins it in another direction

28. Act 2: Confrontation This is the longest bit of the movie. A confrontation occurs that tests the main character and keeps him from getting what he wants. Usually it is a series of events. In Shrek, Shrek and Donkey fight the dragon, and rescue the princess, but Shrek doesn’t really get the princess

29. Plot point 2 The action spins around into Act 3 when the princess is taken to marry the king and donkey reveals that the princess loves Shrek. Now, Shrek must go after the princess.

30. Syd Field’s Screenplay Outline Act 1 set up Act 2 confrontation Act 3 resolution Sets up the action; establishes relationships 30 minutes Main character encounters obstacles that keep him/her from achieving his/her dramatic need 60 minutes Loose ends of story are tied up 30 minutes Plot Point 1 Moves the action in a new direction Plot Point 2 Moves the action in a new direction Plot point: any incident that hooks into the action and spins it in another direction

31. Act 3: Resolution In the last 30 minutes of the movie, the loose ends are tied up and the movie has a comfortable conclusion. In Shrek, donkey and Shrek come into the wedding and rescue the princess again. Shrek and the princess kiss. The movie ends when the princess becomes an ogre for good.

32. Syd Field’s Screenplay Outline Act 1 set up Act 2 confrontation Act 3 resolution Sets up the action; establishes relationships 30 minutes Main character encounters obstacles that keep him/her from achieving his/her dramatic need 60 minutes Loose ends of story are tied up 30 minutes Plot Point 1 Moves the action in a new direction Plot Point 2 Moves the action in a new direction Plot point: any incident that hooks into the action and spins it in another direction

33. To Review: As a class, choose a movie that most of you are familiar with. Talk about how the movie divides into three acts with plot points. What is the set up? The first plot point? What are the main obstacles to be confronted in Act II? What is the second plot point? How is the plot resolved?

34. Display the Screenplay diagram slide And see how the movie you discuss fits on the slide

35. Syd Field’s Screenplay Outline Act 1 set up Act 2 confrontation Act 3 resolution Sets up the action; establishes relationships 30 minutes Main character encounters obstacles that keep him/her from achieving his/her dramatic need 60 minutes Loose ends of story are tied up 30 minutes Plot Point 1 Moves the action in a new direction Plot Point 2 Moves the action in a new direction Plot point: any incident that hooks into the action and spins it in another direction

36. How does your story fit? Now, try to plot your story onto the screenplay diagram. What could you make as the set up? Plot point 1? The confrontation? Plot point 2? The resolution?

37. Teacher time! Now, your teacher is going to show how she can fit his/ her story onto the diagram. As she talks, draw a screenplay outline on your paper, and try to fit your story onto the outline.

38. Syd Field’s Screenplay Outline Act 1 set up Act 2 confrontation Act 3 resolution Sets up the action; establishes relationships 30 minutes Main character encounters obstacles that keep him/her from achieving his/her dramatic need 60 minutes Loose ends of story are tied up 30 minutes Plot Point 1 Moves the action in a new direction Plot Point 2 Moves the action in a new direction Plot point: any incident that hooks into the action and spins it in another direction

39. Tomorrow: Pitching your movie You will learn how Hollywood screenwriters sell their movie ideas to producers. You will learn what a pitch is and how to pitch your own movie.

40. Homework Call another elderly relative you haven’t talked to in a while, or call the same relative you have already called. Tell her you want to know more about her life and would love to hear (more) stories about her best friend when she was younger, or her favorite pet. If she can’t think of a story, ask her to tell you about her first boyfriend or girlfriend. Write down the story. Bring it to class tomorrow. You will be asked to read this story aloud, not just tell it, so be certain that you write it out as carefully as possible.