1. ADULT EMERGENT WRITERS: BUILDING BRIDGES TO LITERACY Julia Reimer / MELEd Conference / Nov. 15, 2014

2. Session Overview  Brief writing task!  Elements of writing  What we know about adult emergent writers from the literature  Current study  Implications for practice

3. Writing task  Imagine that you are renting an apartment. Your toilet leaks, and the window in the kitchen doesn’t close properly.  Write a letter in your L2 to your landlord.

4. Pair / small group task  What did you need to know in order to complete this writing task?

5. Elements of writing

6. Knowing about culture …  What is the purpose of my text? (persuade, inform, request, etc.) What are culturally-appropriate ways to carry out that purpose?  What do I need to know about cultural institutions, customs, etc. in order to convey my meaning appropriately?  How do I vary what I write based on who I’m writing to, what I’m writing about, and the type of writing I’m doing?

7. Knowing about texts …  How is this type of text organized in this language?  How can I create a logical flow in my text?  What language resources do I use to link ideas together throughout my text?  How do I distribute information across paragraphs?

8. Knowing about words…  What nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, prepositions, etc. should I use?  How technical or common should my words be?  How formal or informal should my words and phrases be?

9. Knowing about grammar …  How do I create well-formed sentences?  Should I use statements, questions, or imperatives to get my point across?  How varied should my sentences be: simple, compound, complex?  What grammar structures can help me to connect my ideas logically at the sentence-level?  How do I show tense in verbs? Plurality in nouns?

10. Knowing about mechanics …  How do I spell this word?  How do I form this letter?  How do I use punctuation and capitalization?

11. Knowing about strategies  How do I plan out my writing?  How do I generate ideas?  How do I get a sense of whether people understand what I’m trying to convey?  How do I know that I’ve written things correctly?

12. Systemic Functional Linguistics  Together, these elements help us to convey information, interact with our audience, and create cohesive texts.  We make purposeful choices in the language we use to adjust to audience, purpose, genre.

13. The issue “Despite the capacity of writing to facilitate reading development and the need for adults to be able to write for work, education, and other purposes, writing has not been included in major surveys of adult learners, nor have writing skills been a focus of adult literacy research.” - Gillespie (2001), as cited in Lesgold & Welch-Ross (2012)

14. Research Questions  What language resources do low­literacy adult writers use to convey information, interact with their audience, and create cohesive texts?  What writing prompts and scaffolding activities are teachers using to support the these learners’ writing?

15. What do we know about the emergent writing of … L1 children?  more “spoken” > more “written” simple clauses, simple words, pronouns, simple clause relations > more complexity, subordination lower lexical density > higher lexical density  declaration > elaboration  translation > transformation

16. What do we know about the emergent writing of … Adult literacy learners (ABE; both L1 & L2)?  spelling is less accurate and inconsistent  more non-phonetic and morphological errors

17. What do we know about the emergent writing of … L2 adult literacy learners?  L1 literacy has + impact on L2 literacy  Age makes a difference! generational conflicts; erosion of status of elders  Learners make less progress in writing than in reading.  Literacy viewed as a community- / family-held resource rather than an individually-held skill  Spelling: developmental patterns and strategies used by L2 adult literacy learners are similar to those of L1 children.

18. Current study  Research Questions:  What language resources do low­literacy adult writers use to convey information, interact with their audience, and create cohesive texts?  What writing prompts and scaffolding activities are teachers using to support the these learners’ writing?  Participants  10 local teachers  approximately 60 texts from approximately 40 students  CASAS scores range from 180s to 220s; years of prior formal education range from 0-8 years  Data Collection & Analysis  Collected texts as part of regular classroom tasks; analyze using UAM Corpus Tool  Teaching practices survey; reading group; workshops

19. Sample texts FH & SH:  Genre: description  Sequence: read Chai Lor story, answer comprehension questions, write description EA, AS, LA:  Genre: recount  Weekly journal: life history DF:  Genre: response  Sequence: read Call of the Wild, prompt: “How are you and Buck similar and not similar?”, Venn diagram, write

20. Sample text analysis: cohesion  Lexical cohesion:  repetition of words, or words from the same word family (e.g. coherent, cohesive, cohesion) or use of synonyms  use of general words (like the place, the girl, the facility) to refer to something more specific that is mentioned elsewhere  use of words from the same thematic field (e.g. texts, readers, written)  substitution of previously mentioned words with one/ones  ellipsis of previously mentioned words (i.e. leaving a word out because it can be recovered from the previous text)

21. Cohesion, continued  Grammatical cohesion  reference devices, especially pronouns (it may help…) and some determiners (e.g. this, that)  substitution of previously mentioned clause elements, with do/does, or so/not  ellipsis of clause elements  linkers, such as therefore, what’s more, then  parallelism, i.e. sentences that “echo” the structure of previous sentences

22. Sample text analysis: logic Extending Meanings: Addition (ex: and) Replacing / contrast (ex: but, yet, or, etc.) Enhancing Meanings: Sequence (before, after, etc.) Time (when, as soon as, etc.) Manner (by, as if, etc.) Cause (so, because, causes, etc.) Condition (if, unless, etc.) Concession (yet, but, although, etc.) Elaborating Meanings: Restating (that is, etc.) Reformulating Describing Exemplifying Apposition

23. Scaffolding all levels of language for emergent writers Implications for Practice

24. + Culture / text level  Discussions about the culture, topic and text-type o In the US, my family is usually my husband / wife and children. In your family, who is your family? o In your country, how do you say “Hello” to a friend? to your mother? to a teacher? In the US, we say …  Expose learners to a variety of text types.  Listen to a situation and write an appropriate short note on a card. Happy birthday! With sympathy. Thank you.

25. Word level Word webs Identify synonyms

26. + Sentence level  Sentence combining Use and, but or because: 1. I am busy _____ I have two jobs and three children. 2. I used to live in Somalia _____ now I live in Minneapolis. Sentence frames Cut up sentences / paragraphs

27. + Mechanics level  Use “punctuation frames”  Work on manual dexterity o “air writing” o cut things with scissors to strengthen muscles o form letters in sand, playdough o use “fat” pencils o draw shapes  Work on spelling  Use “letter frames”

28. + Strategies level  Peer support o collaborative writing o peer feedback (underline a good sentence; circle a word you don’t understand)  Prepare for writing o read model texts, answer comprehension questions o class conversation about the topic (to develop vocabulary, concepts, ideas for what to write) o word web o students talk about pictures with each other  Teacher feedback o mini-conferences with individual students o whole-class error correction on board / ELMO