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2. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unpredictable. Not only youngsters but also adults find enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This issue brings a controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

3. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over 0 past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unpredictable. Not only youngsters but also adults find enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This issue brings a controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

4. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over the past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unexpected. Not only youngsters but also adults find enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This issue brings a controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

5. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over the past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unexpected. Not only youngsters but also adults find it enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This issue brings a controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

6. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over the past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unexpected. Not only youngsters but also adults find it enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This issue brings a controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

7. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over the past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unexpected. Not only youngsters but also adults find it enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This popularity of computer games has caused/provoked/aroused a lot of controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

8. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over the past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unexpected. Not only youngsters but also adults find it enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This popularity of computer games has caused a lot of controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is being responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way in socialization?

9. Sample 1: Read this opening paragraph Gaming has gained a lot of popularity over the past few years. With the progress of technology and people`s interest in modern gadgets it is not unexpected. Not only youngsters but also adults find it enjoyable to spend their leisure time playing video or computer games. This popularity of computer games has caused a lot of controversy. Is it a harmful activity that is responsible for health and social problems or an innovative way of socializing?

10. Sample 2: Read this paragraph Games are a natural way of relaxation and were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a ball of fur for kitten or just pretended fighting between cubs. Computer games can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

11. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Games are a natural way of relaxation and were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a ball of fur for kitten or just pretended fighting between cubs. Computer games can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

12. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Playing games is a natural way to relax and games were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a ball of fur for kitten or just pretended fighting between cubs. Computer games can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

13. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Playing games is a natural way to relax and games were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a ball of fur for kitten or just pretended fighting between cubs. Computer games can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

14. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Playing games is a natural way to relax and games were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a kitten chasing a ball of fur or cubs having a pretend fight. COHERENCE Computer games can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

15. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Playing games is a natural way to relax and games were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a kitten chasing a ball of fur or cubs having a pretend fight. Computer games are just another kind of games. They can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

16. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Playing games is a natural way to relax and games were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a kitten chasing a ball of fur or cubs having a pretend fight. Computer games are just another kind of games. They can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons, who played FPS shooters, were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games, which force you to think, can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

17. Sample 1: Read this paragraph Playing games is a natural way to relax and games were here since the dawn of life on the planet Earth. A lot of mammal babies are born with the need to play, being it a kitten chasing a ball of fur or cubs having a pretend fight. Computer games are just another kind of games. They can improve your language skills, as well as reflexes. According to a study done by American scientists, surgeons who played FPS shooters were more precise and could better withstand stress. Games which force you to think can improve your strategic thinking or different kinds of management.

18. Sample 2 read this concluding paragraph Therefore playing computer games, if kept under control, can bring a lot of positive things and shouldn’t be abandoned before even trying it.

19. Sample 2 read this concluding paragraph Therefore, playing computer games, if kept under control, can bring the player a lot of positive things and shouldn’t be abandoned before even trying it. … be dismissed/rejected before being even tried

20. Sample 2 read this concluding paragraph Therefore, playing computer games, if kept under control, can bring the player a lot of positive things and shouldn’t be dismissed before being even tried.