1. Kirsty Alexander, Reach Project Officer University of St Andrews
Personal Statements
Kirsty Alexander, Reach Project Officer University of St Andrews

2. What is covered: What a Personal Statement is
Recommended content and structure of a Personal Statement
Writing your Personal Statement
Dos and Don’ts

3. The UCAS Three:
Academic Grades
Reference
Personal Statement

4. What is a Personal Statement?
Comprises one third of your application
It helps you to make your application stand out
It is a piece of work that is as important as any you have done so far

5. What makes a strong Personal Statement?
Engagement with the subject/department
A commitment to and understanding of the subject area/profession
Themes/areas of interest – relate to university course e.g. department specialisations (use department websites)
Indication of key debates/ ‘hot topics’/new research – personal views on these?
Wider reading beyond school texts – invest in a first year text book?

6. What makes a strong Personal Statement?
Motivation for choosing the subject
Career plans – general, not specific (e.g. not future Prime Minister)
Personal experiences
Personal interest/curiosity e.g. interest in how things work? How politics affects ordinary people?

7. What makes a strong Personal Statement?
Evidence of interest in the subject
School subject choices – why are they relevant, any specific projects
Reach project!
Relevant extra-curricular activities
Occasional events – work experience, internships
Academic attainment
Prizes/recognition of academic qualities

8. What makes a strong Personal Statement?
Evidence of responsibility/transferable skills
Position of responsibility e.g. prefect, mentoring, leader of organisation, first aider
Independent work – projects
Group work – committees, sport, drama,
Communication skills – public speaking, drama
Commitment – membership of organisation including sports, art, music
In all of above – what skills have been gained, how these have been exercised and how can you use these at university or for the subject you want to study

9. Things you must avoid: Lack of in-depth awareness of subject
Indication that you’re not committed to a particular subject e.g. when applying for different courses
Focusing on one subject if you are making joint applications e.g. if Philosophy and German must link the two together and ensure relevance between them
Mentioning a university by name e.g. ‘I’ve always wanted to go to St Andrews…’
Detailed description of e.g. school trips/extra-curricular activity only – must link it back to the subject
Unsubstantiated claims (I want to be PM), jokes/humour (may not be understood) or abstract/irrelevant stories (When I was young I always wanted to be a princess, but now…)
Plagiarism!

10. Practical first steps Treat it as a job application
Take a couple of pieces of paper & jot down all the things you feel you might like to include
Gather together all your certificates, papers and notes
Do not expect to complete it quickly - take your time, draft ideas etc. It ought to take weeks to perfect
Talk to your teachers, parents & friends already at university
Draft in a Word document – do not write your Personal Statement into your UCAS application. Only copy and paste carefully once you are completely happy with it

11. Practical first steps
Start during your summer break (October 15 and January 15 deadlines)
Be aware of your own school deadlines
Think carefully about why you are applying to Higher Education
Check course requirements and details
Draft a statement and read it over and then read it again
Get someone to read it over – ask them if it represents you correctly

12. How to make a good impression:
Don’t repeat material already on the application form
Take care with the layout - make the most of what you’ve got
Do not start every sentence or paragraph with 'I'
Unpack and expand on things e.g. “I am a prefect”
Don’t finish up with a long list of unrelated hobbies
Be positive and enthusiastic
Don’t ramble, or pad it out
Take care with your sentence structure and check your spelling and grammar

13. Deferred Entry:
Use your Personal Statement to prove to admissions officers that you will be doing something constructive with your time
Work/travel in an area relating to your chosen course will earn you “brownie points”
Remember that deferred entry is not always available on some popular courses - always check with the University first!

14. Reference:
Parent power – ask the school to provide a reference for your child from a teacher who knows them
Submit your UCAS application as soon as it is ready – teacher has longer to write a properly crafted reference
Provide the teacher writing your reference with a list of relevant activities, personal qualities or other important information about yourself that you would like them to mention in your reference
Ask to see your reference before it is sent off – check that it refers to you, mentions things about you and does not contain the wrong name – demand no ‘copy and paste’ job

15. Reference:
Highly important part of the application – value/importance often underestimated by teachers
Applicants sometimes rejected on the reference
Important in differentiating between candidates
Personal – indicates referee thinks the candidate is worth spending time over
Academic capabilities including predicted grades, prizes, class comparison
Extra-curricular activities especially school-related – this means the applicant does not have to go into detail on these in the Personal Statement
Evidence of personal qualities

16. Questions?