1. Please take out your handout titled “Common Mistakes to Avoid Making in Academic Writing” from last class.

2. Objectives Students will be able to . . .
Identify the tone and point of view of “Indian Camp” by annotating the text
Compare / contrast the tone and point of view in “On the Quai at Smyrna” and “Indian Camp”
Identify symbols within the text and analyze them by explaining their purpose in the text

3. Do now
Finish filling out the “Common Mistakes” handout. Be prepared to go over the examples and reasoning in a few minutes. 15

4. CEA Method KEEP THIS HANDOUT FOR THE REST OF THE YEAR! DO NOT LOSE IT!
TREAT IT LIKE YOUR MOST PRIZED POSSESSION! 10

5. Written Response: Reflection
Take a look at the feedback that Ms. R gave you. Within your table group, take turns and share . . .
one thing you do well in your writing
one thing you are going to improve upon in your writing 5

6. Written Response: Revision
Based on the feedback that Ms. R gave you, revise your first written response on a half sheet of paper.
Be sure to use your CEA Method and “Common Mistakes” handout as guides. 15

7. Written Response: Revision
1. In Our Time, a collection of short stories by Ernest Hemingway is considered a modernist text. Identify and provide at least two examples explaining how “On the Quai at Smyrna” is an example of a modernist vignette.
Be sure to develop a clear claim that answers the prompt.
Be sure to cite the text appropriately.
Be sure to explain how your evidence proves your claim.

8. BREAK
10 mins!

9. Intro to “Indian Camp”
Let’s read “The Hard Lives -- and High Suicide Rate of Native American Children on Reservations” from The Washington Post.
Focus on underlining the reasons why Native American Youth commit suicide.