1. Objective: To understand how to evaluate other students’ work
Rainforest Diary
Objective: To understand how to evaluate other students’ work
All must be able to notice how to improve writing
Most should be able to evaluate others’ work
Some could be able to use this to revise their diaries

2. Where is the hidden tiger?

3. Improving writing: How many errors can you notice
Improving writing: How many errors can you notice? How can you improve them?
The jungle was green and dark and warm. The air was thik. It was well scarie I could here buzzing. i noticed an exotic bird in the trees and it was flash of colour. I gazed around and walked further in. I didnt no what was in store for me.

4. Improving Writing Varied punctuation Exciting verbs and adjectives
Varied sentence openings and types
Informal language
Spelling

5. Select the two days of your diary that you think could be improved
Have a conversation with your someone in the class that you trust about which days you would like each other to assess.

6. Now discuss with each other what you have noticed
Now use your peer assessment sheet to notice how to improve other’s writing of the days your partner has asked you to look at
Write down two things that your writing partner has done well and two targets for improvement
Now discuss with each other what you have noticed

7. Improving our writing
Use your writing targets to improve your writing.

8. Have improvements been made?
Now swap your books again.
Has your writing partner met his/her targets?
How have they met them?