1. COHESIVE DEVICES
INTRODUCTION

2. WHAT DO YOU THINK ABOUT WRITING?

3. writing is ..... FUN EASY BORING DIFFICULT ADDICTIVE IMPORTANT
CONFUSING
BORING
CHALLENGING
INTERESTING

4. COMMON PROBLEM IN WRITING???
Grammar
Spelling
Punctuation
Capitalization
Organization

5. What do you think about this paragraph?1
I like banana. Banana is sweet. My parents usually buy it. They buy it at the nearest market. My sister does not like it. She likes Apple. Apple is more expensive.

6. What do you think about this paragraph?2
I have two younger brothers. They are Andrew and Jonathan. They have different hobbies however they live in the same house. Andrew likes to play music but he has become the champion for many music competitions. Finally, Jonathan dislikes to play music. Jonathan’s hobby is swimming or he goes swimming every weekend. Otherwise, I love my brothers very much.

7. Paragraph 1 is grammatically correct but it sounds boring.
Paragraph 2 contains inappropriate connection words.

8. CONCLUSION
We need to put correct COHESIVE DEVICES to connect our ideas in a paragraph/essay.