1. Sentence 5
undoubtedly I will go to chipotle for lunch and I will get guacamole too I know it’s extra

2. Sentence 5 Trade and Grade
Undoubtedly, I will go to Chipotle for lunch, and I will get guacamole too; I know it’s extra.

3. Bell Ringer Scoring 6/6 = 4 5/6 = 3 4/6 = 2.5 3/6 = 2 2/6 = 1.5
1/6 = 1
0/6 = 0

4. Agenda Bell Ringer: MUG Shot Sentence 5 Narrative Outlines
Advanced: Turn in
General: Complete
Writing Day 1

5. Advanced: Narrative Outlines
Make sure your name is on your outline
Check that you have followed all instructions above and below each paragraph box
Pass them forward

6. General: Narrative Outlines
Today you will complete your narrative outline.
First, you must decide on your topic.
Remember, you are to write about something or someone that has impacted your IDENTITY.
Look at your memory mining sheet!
Once you have decided on your topic, I will give you the appropriate outline.

7. General: Narrative Outlines
Focus for outlines:
Introduction
Uses a hook strategy
Introduces setting and character(s)
Body Paragraphs
Are appropriately sequenced (this will depend on your topic and outline)
Are developed through the use of narrative techniques
Imagery/description
Characterization
Dialogue
Conclusion
Begins with a reflective prompt
Uses a conclusion strategy

8. Writing Day 1
Add a PERSON using school , then open a web browser
Then go to GOOGLE.COM and click the little boxes and go to GoogleDocs
Everyone must type their personal narrative on Google Docs.
Before you begin typing, you need to do three things:
First, title your document LastName, FirstName Personal Narrative
Second, share the document with me at
Third, format your paper accordingly for MLA format.
Directions on next slide.

9. MLA Formatting 1 inch margins on all sides – File & page setup
Times New Roman font – toolbar font
Size 12 font – toolbar font size
Running header with last name and page number (in that order)
1. Double click at the top of the document.
2. Align text right.
3. Inset, Page Number, and the top left option.
4. Click your mouse in front of the number and type your last name
5. Make sure your header is also in 12 point Times New Roman

10. MLA Formatting MLA heading 1. Your first and last name
2. The name of the teacher
3. The name of the course
4. The date (00 Month 2016)
Double line spacing – Format, Line Spacing, Double
Centered title: Personal Narrative
Example on next slide.

12. Checklist
I have at least three examples of vivid, descriptive language that develops setting and character.
I have developed the physical appearance and personality traits of all characters in my memoir including myself.
I have sequenced the events in my memoir in a way that my readers can follow (things generally happen in order, and if I present a flashback, I use transition words to indicate I’m flashing back).
I have a conclusion that reflects on the impact of these events: how they changed me, what I learned from them, and how they will affect my future.
I have checked for capitalization errors, along with errors in the comma rules we have learned so far: commas with intro phrases, commas in lists, commas with FANBOYS, and commas with extra info.
Also:
May use meaningful, properly-punctuated pieces of dialogue that advance the plot, establish character relationships, or reveal character traits.