1. Learning Development & Student Writing
According to Lillis (2001) Nowhere in the university system is the debate about the ‘crisis’ in education and the ‘lowering of standards’ more intense than in the arena of student writing.

2. Learning Development & Student Writing
In this presentation I will discuss how my Learning Development practice has helped me to understand student issues with – and attitudes to – their writing and how I have fed this understanding into development materials produced for both staff and students.

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Wider Context:
Move to mass HE – global marketing of HE
Institutional Context
Lecturers:
Driven by internal & external targets, inspections & QA
Little time to tackle complex issues with students
Run increasingly larger lecture & seminar groups
Few opportunities for formative feedback
See students as not being able to write grammatical English or to formulate syntactically correct sentences
Send students to Learning Development to be ‘fixed’ (Mitchell 2003)

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Students:
dismembered by the discourse of derision
working – 20 or more hours per week
raising families
little time:
to tackle new material
to practice their thinking/writing
to familiarise themselves with a bewildering array of assessment engines

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Imagine tackling
Presentations & seminars
Essays, reports, papers, dissertations & projects
Case studies & child studies
Annotated bibliographies
Reading Records
Learning Logs
Abstracts & Summaries

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Seen & unseen exams
Open or closed book exams
Exams with differing time limits
Exams with differing word limits
AND that perennial favourite
Group work – with group mark awarded
Group work – with individual mark awarded
Group work - with self- and/or peer evaluation

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Student responses to this:
I’ve been humiliated in ways I’d never have put up with outside that institution
I am still not sure if my work is considered academic, I still don’t know what makes one of my essays better than another.  

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Academic language, the kind of language that doesn’t readily flow off my tongue: the type of language I rarely use when speaking to my peers. The type of language that I don’t readily understand and the type of language that means spending hours at a computer turning something quite simple into something that sounds moderately impressive with elitist results.

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Staff development activities
Took these quotes and many more and built them into a Writing Resistance Workshop at Conference in Plymouth last year.

10. Learning Development & Student Writing
Some responses captured in the staff writing:
The type of language that, quite frankly, has caused me much concern and about which I have spent much, probably too much time, reflecting upon…

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This was such a familiar conversation. I have heard it many times in my research – it is the bewilderment that I find most worrying. When people don’t even know where to start in terms of asking for help. To not even be able to say STOP, I don’t know how to even begin

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Well yes, I can relate to this … when I studied at undergraduate level my tutors, in the main, were distant and detached. Often they used language to demonstrate their knowledge rather than develop mine.

13. Learning Development & Student Writing
Oh face up to it – I do still disempower my students, I do expect them to use long, posh words like me. I even give them phrases I want them to try using like me ‘the construction of gender through multiple discourses’ and feel terribly self-satisfied if they actually do

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The student quotes are now part of a STAFF DEVELOPMENT PACK that we have in Learning Development – and that we will be using here in the Learning & Teaching Conference – July 2005.

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FURTHER
We have built the WebCT ‘Write to Learn’
Not as yet another initiative – but to help students with real writing tasks within real modules

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Student evaluation at this moment – to propel further development

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Conclusion
Working in Learning Development affords unique opportunities to work with and listen to students
We work hard to build what we learn into staff development activities – like ‘Writing Resistance’ &
Student resources - like Write to Learn
At this time of dynamic change in HE, Learning Development is at the heart of WP – and access, retention , progression & achievement.