1. Writing Thesis Statements
“The Scarlet Ibis” Interpretive Essay

2. What is a Thesis Statement?
A THESIS STATEMENT is a one-sentence statement that expresses the central claim that you will prove in your essay.
It comes at the end of your introductory paragraph.
It should contain two parts:
Identification of your topic
An explanation of what your essay will prove/ demonstrate about that topic

3. What SHOULD be in my thesis?
It should contain two parts:
Identification of your topic
An explanation of what your essay will prove/ demonstrate about that topic
In the case of this essay, your thesis needs to contain:
The theme you are analyzing
The literary elements that contribute to that theme

4. What should NOT be in my thesis?
“Be” verbs (am, are, is, was, were, be, been, being)
Any “I” statements like “I believe,” “I will prove,” “I think”
Phrases that call your authority into question (like “it seems”)
Summary

5. Interpretive Essay Working Thesis
Your assignment now is to write a WORKING THESIS for your interpretive essay over “The Scarlet Ibis.”
Ex. In “The Scarlet Ibis,” James Hurst uses irony and personification to suggest that pride has the ability to cause destruction.

6. Working Thesis Checklist
Does my thesis contain
My theme? (should be yes)
Two (2) literary elements that help build my theme? (should be yes)
“Be” verbs? (should be no)
“I” statements? (should be no)
NOTE: Each “be” verb or “I” statement will result in a 50-point deduction. This is a one-sentence daily grade.