1. PIN feedback – Task 1 (making the conclusion balanced)
KEY TIPS
Start your conclusion with the counter argument…
In conclusion, …. was important in the… because it led to…
Then explain how / why your argument is stronger
However, this is not as important as… because this led to…
In conclusion, the role of the individual has certainly been a key part in the development of medicine as without Pasteur, Jenner and Lister and their respective discoveries of the germ theory in 1861, vaccination and carbolics in 1861, then medicine would never have developed from the Medieval period. However, it would be unwise to see that it has been the main factor as the individuals work would not have happened or had the effect that it did without other key factors playing a part.