1. February 2, 2018 – same homework as yesterday
Do what you know your need to do at the beginning of class!
HOMEWORK:
Both sides of sentence types: be sure to follow instructions and Sentence examples should be original(your own, not anyone else’s)
Finish writing draft of essay for Monday
Friday! Fresh Air Friday!
Today is your day to write the draft. Last few minutes, we will review sentence types.

2. Time to write your first draft. Make revisions as needed.
February 2, 2018
Time to write your first draft. Make revisions as needed.
Topic sentences connect to thesis
Evidence supports idea (MLA citations)
Formal writing
no 1st & 2nd person pronouns
Diction (word choice –formal)
No contractions (did you remember this one?)

3. When writing 1st draft—Revise the following
1. Must revise your thesis and 2 or 3 main ideas into 1(2 maximum sentences) (Advertisers play a ________ role in the lives of youth by ______________, ________________, and ____________________.)
2. Revise topic sentence: does my topic sentence connect to my thesis?
3. Conclusion: reorder into correct order
Transition, rephrase thesis, rephrase main ideas, clincher
4. Think sentence types! Do not punctuation errors in your sentence patterns; you know them now!

4. When writing 1st draft—Revise topic sentences
First, … model paragraph-everyone has the same one.
Another way, ___________ effects ________ is through …