1. Unit1 Where did you go on vacation? Section B（3a-3c）
湖北省襄阳市诸葛亮中学 张焰

2. 课文图片

3. Monday, July 15th Tuesday, July 16th waited over an hour for the train
tried paragliding
rode bicycles
went to Penang Hill
had a bowl of rice
and fish
didn’t bring an
umbrella
had Malaysian
yellow noodles
walked around
the town

4. partner
food
place
activities
weather
feelings
time

5. Where did I go on vacation?

6. 3a 3a Fill in the blanks with the words and phrases.
A hot and sunny
B Beijing duck
C take some photos
D buy something special
E learn something
important
Wednesday,__________20th
J August
A hot and sunny
Today the weather was___________________.
the Palace Museum/…
I went to_______________________. It was
F tired
G delicious
H beautiful
I interesting
J August
H beautiful /
I interesting
C took some photos/
D bought something special
____________. We____________________ .
E learnt something important
I like this place because I __________________________________.
B Beijing duck
G delicious
For dinner we had_______________. It was___________.
In the evening, I felt really__________.
F tired

7. 3a Read the diary entry together. time weather place activities
Beginning
Wednesday, August 20th
time
Today the weather was hot and sunny
weather
I went to the Palace Museum It was
place
beautiful .
We took some photos
activities
Main body
I like this place because I learnt something important .
For dinner we had Beijing duck . It was delicious .
Ending
In the evening, I felt really tired .
feelings

8. Beginning Main body Ending
food
feelings
Beginning
feelings
activities
partner
My travel
Main body
place
weather
Ending
time

9. Framework (结构) Beginning Main body Ending time place feelings partner
We thought
partner
weather
We saw
We heard
My travel
We did
Main body
activities
We ate
We played
We enjoyed
...
Ending
feelings

10. Tip1: Frame and content (结构与内容)
Wednesday, August 20th
I went to the Palace Museum with my family today. The weather was hot and sunny.
There are a lot of old and special buildings in it. They were so beautiful that I took quite a few photos. And I heard many interesting stories of old China. They helped me learn something important, such as, the culture(文化), the history. When I walked around the museum, I wonder what life was like here in the past. For dinner, we had Beijing duck. Although it was very delicious, I didn’t eat too much. That was because I don’t want to be fat.
What a wonderful day! All of us felt tired but really happy.
Beginning
Main body
Ending

11. Tip1: Frame and content (结构与内容) Tip2: Good language(语言)
Wednesday, August 20th
I went to the Palace Museum with my family today. The weather was hot and sunny.
There are a lot of old and special buildings in it. They were so beautiful that I took quite a few photos. And I heard many interesting stories of old China. They helped me learn something important, such as, the culture, the history. When I walked around the museum, I wonder what life was like here in the past. For dinner, we had Beijing duck. Although it was very delicious, I didn’t eat too much. That was because I don’t want to be fat.
What a wonderful day! All of us felt tired but really happy.
Beginning
Main body
Ending

12. What a wonderful day! All of us felt tired but really happy.
Tip1: Frame and content (结构与内容)
Tip2: Good language(语言)
Tip3: Correct grammar(语法)
Tip4: Handwriting(书写)
Wednesday, August 20th
I go to the Palace Museum with my family today. The weather was hot and sunny.
There are a lot of old and special buildings in it. They were so beautiful that I took quiet a few photos. And I heard many interesting stories of old China. They helped me learn something important, such as, the culture, the history. When I walked around the museum, I wonder what life was like here in the past. For dinner, we had Beijing duck. Although it was very delicious, I didn’t eat too much. That was because I don’t want to be fat.
What a wonderful day! All of us felt tired but really happy. 时态
went
quite 拼写

13. Main body (activities)
Ask and answer the questions about a vacation you took, and then fill in the blanks.
Beginning
time
place
partner
weather
Main body (activities)
Ending (feelings)
Where did you go?
2. Did you go with anyone?
3. How was the weather?
4. What did you do every day?
5. What food did you eat?
6. What did you like best?
7. Did you dislike anything?
8. How did you feel about the
trip?
9. ……

14. 3c 3c
Write a travel diary with the information
in your form.

15. Tips for your writing Content and frame (内容和结构) Good language （语言）
rich content and
complete frame
（内容丰富结构完整）
Content and frame
(内容和结构)
Good sentences
Good phrases
Good words
Good language
（语言）
Content and frame
(内容和结构)
Tips
Correct tense (时态)
Spelling words（单词拼写）
Punctuations（标点符号）
Correct grammar
（语法）
Good handwriting
（书写）
Clean and neat (干净整洁)
Good handwriting
（书写）

16. ﹋ Good Come on! 总体评价 Excellent Good sentences, phrases, words (好词，好句)
Content and frame
(内容和结构)
Missing words
（漏词）
Mistakes
（错误）
Beginning:
Main body:
Ending: ﹋
Content and frame
(内容和结构)
Correct grammar
（语法）
Good language
（语言）
Good writing
（书写）
Good
More than 12
Come on!
Less than 12
总体评价
Excellent
More than 16

17. Enjoy traveling
Enjoy life! 01 03 02
Enjoy writing

18. 要求：结构完整，内容丰富；语言正确优美；书写工整。
Homework
Modify(修改) your diaries again, and then write in your exercise books.
Tips:
要求：结构完整，内容丰富；语言正确优美；书写工整。

19. THANK YOU!