1. REDACTION REDACTION re·dac·tion rəˈdakSH(ə)n/ noun
re·dac·tion
rəˈdakSH(ə)n/
noun
the process of editing text for publication.
a version of a text, such as a new edition or an abridged version.
plural noun: redactions
the censoring or obscuring of part of a text for legal or security purposes.

2. Examples of ‘redactin’ in legal documents….
People in official positions who make incorrect pronouncements are often asked to ‘retract’ their statement. This is an official declaration of ‘omission and/or incorrect pronouncement’
If the person does not ‘retract’ their statement, it can lead to legal issues.
Slander:

3. re·trac·tion rəˈtrakSH(ə)n/ noun 1
re·trac·tion rəˈtrakSH(ə)n/ noun 1. the action of drawing something back or back in. "prey are grasped between the jaws upon tongue retraction" 2. a withdrawal of a statement, accusation, or undertaking. "he issued a retraction of his allegations"

4. re·dac·tion rəˈdakSH(ə)n/ noun the process of editing text for publication. a version of a text, such as a new edition or an abridged version. plural noun: redactions the censoring or obscuring of part of a text for legal or security purposes.

11. In all of these examples, you experience the interplay of language (words you see on the page) juxtaposed with both the seen and the unseen(words and blacked out words underneath.)the spacing and order and finally the interconnected image all play together to create a new sense of the passage. If you put the two together, you will undoubtedly see and feel the difference in both emotional and intellectual reaction. The two combined create a new meaning from the original text from the author. It is ripped from the original storyline and given new significance. P. Dobie

16. Your selection should be based on:
English 11
Activity : Creative Extension : Lord of The Flies. REDACTED POEM
Value: 6% of term III
Due: April 4th, 2017
Based on the example of the ‘redacted poem’ you created in class,
now choose one or two pages (consecutive) from the novel.
criteria:
SELECTION FROM TEXT (EXCERPT)
Your selection should be based on:
a character
-dialogue
-inner monologue
a critical scene (plot)
description (imagery)
-conflict

18. POEM CREATED FROM EXCERPT Ultimately, you should choose text that is replete with rich imagery or description. Your poem should consider the following poetic devices: metaphor, imagery, sound devices (alliteration, cacophony, assonance, consonance), juxtaposition/contrast, hyperbole, repetition, emphasis, synecdoche, use of capitalization (or lack of) and other poetic devices (see your booklet). as well as…metalinguistics (space and silence created on the page).

19. Your redacted poem may take these forms:
a. as you see in the example here, you may create an image behind the text and make your choose words BOLD while making the text very opaque or extremely light. The ‘found poem’ should be able to be read clearly. You must ensure there is a frame.
b. Rewrite your poem (you may play with the suffixes and or prepositions in order to have the poem read smoothly) & draw/colour an image behind it, beside it etc. You must also give it a frame.
c. White out the extraneous words, leaving the ‘redacted poem’ able to be read. Add an image embedded, beside or behind.