1. Powow Regalia Mrs Goudie-Cloutier and Mrs. Bentham

2. Powwow Regalia The dancers wear fancy regalia! Regalia is special clothing worn at Powwows. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. One of the dancers is holding a black and white eagle fan. The dancers are wearing colourful, fancy regalia.

3. 1. The dancers are having fun. (Amy) 4. The pink dress is a jingle dress. (Paul) 5. Colourful clothing is worn while dancing. (Bo) 9. The dancers wear fancy regalia. (Regan) 15. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. (Sami) 22. I love the bells and ribbons on the jingle dress. (Lori) 23. One of the dancers is holding an eagle fan. (Mohammed)

4. Thank you Amy, Paul, Bo, Regan, Sami, Lori and Mohammed for sharing your sentences!

5. 9.The dancers wear fancy regalia. (Regan) I like this sentence!!! It talks about all of the regalia and the word fancy makes it sound exciting. I’m going to add an exclamation mark and start here!

6. 4.The pink dress is a jingle dress. 22. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. Hmm… I have to remember to always take off the numbers!!! I will try to put two sentences together

7. I know that regalia is clothing worn especially for Powwow maybe I will tell that to my readers…it’s my own idea! I’m not using a sentence from a friend. Regalia is special clothing worn at powwows.

8. 15. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. I like this sentence the way it is- it fits well into my paragraph.

9. The dancers wear fancy regalia! Regalia is special clothing worn at Powwows. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. Let's read what we have so far…

10. One of the dancers is holding an eagle fan. Les filles et les garçons mangent le sirop d’ érable Les filles et les garçons mangent le sirop d’ érable I want my reader to know that the eagle fan is not colourful so I am going to add the real colours One of the dancers is holding a black and white eagle fan.

11. The dancers wear fancy regalia! Regalia is special clothing worn at Powwows. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. One of the dancers is holding a black and white eagle fan.

12. I like it! I just need to finish…

13. The dancers are having fun. I have two sentences left… I need to think of a way to end my paragraph. Colourful clothing is worn while dancing.

14. I want to end by talking about the dancers. I can’t ask them if they are having fun so I will take that out… The dancers are wearing colourful, fancy regalia. The dancers are having fun. Colourful clothing is worn while dancing.

15. The dancers wear fancy regalia! Regalia is special clothing worn at Powwows. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. One of the dancers is holding a black and white eagle fan. The dancers are wearing colourful, fancy regalia.

16. Now I need to have a title. The title will be my promise to my reader. I think I will call it Powwow Regalia

17. Powwow Regalia The dancers wear fancy regalia! Regalia is special clothing worn at Powwows. I love the bells and ribbons on the pink jingle dress. Look at all the beautiful feathers on the regalia. One of the dancers is holding a black and white eagle fan. The dancers are wearing colourful, fancy regalia. By Mrs. Bentham and Mrs.Goudie-Cloutier

19. Attributes in my writing I have: o Clear idea MeFriendTeacher o A title o o 4 5 6 7 Sentences o Punctuation. ! ? o Capitals at the start of each sentence o Word wall words spelled properly o Illustration Comments: