1. Welcome 话题写作

2. Advertisements Topic

3. Advantages …help us in many aspects. …benefit … a lot./…be beneficial to … keep sb. informed of; have access to; be accessible to expose sb. to sth., help …compare … have a better understanding of … promote the sales of, sell well educate sb. to do …/ teach sb. to do

4. However, there exist a lot of disadvantages. mislead sb. / cheat sb. into /take in.. interrupt sb./ bother sb. do harm to. / be harmful to, increase the cost of …/ waste …doing … Disadvantages

5. Your attitude / opinion: 1.As far as I am concerned, … outweigh … 2.Even though … I still consider it … 3.With all its … we must acknowledge … 4.I believe we can … as long as … …

6. Part1: Part2: Part3: Learn to organize introduction to your topic advantages / disadvantages your opinion

7. A good composition Organization ContentLanguage

8. Reading As science and technology develops, we can see advertisements almost everywhere. Advertisements help people get much information about new products. Company can sell more products than before. And some advertisements educate the public. Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. It wastes a lot of natural resources,which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They make us upset. I think advertising is useful. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. (Introduction) (Advantages) (Disadvantages) ( My opinion) (86words)

9. Learn to polish As science and technology develops, we can see advertisements almost everywhere 增分策略一 使用高级词汇 people are constantly exposed to ads … People have access to … /are accessible to ads … Advertising finds its way into / floods into our daily life …. With science and technology developing With the development of science and technology, 替换为：

10. 1. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which increases the cost of products. 1) … increasing the cost of products. 增分策略 二 使用非谓语形式 2 ) … causing / leading to / resulting in/ contributing to / bringing about … 2. If we have enough facts from ads, we can easily make a much better choice. … the higher prices of products. enough facts from ads, we can ….Having enough facts from … Armed with / Equipped with

11. 1. Para.2 is about advantages of advertisements. Para3: Advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. However, advertisements have some bad effects on our daily life. 增分策略三 巧用过渡连接表达 2. It wastes a lot of natural resources, which increases the cost of products. They mislead or even cheat consumers. They also make us upset. In the first place, it wastes …. In the second place, they mislead ….Furthermore, they make us upset. ( 段内句子之间衔接 ) ( 段际过渡 )

12. 增分策略四 加强一义多形 How to express one ’ s opinion or suggestion 1. As far as I am concerned … / As to me/From my point of view … we should attach more importance to … 2. As for my own idea about … I believe/think / propose / suggest … 3. Personally/ But for me, I would rather … / prefer … to …. 4. Even though … I still consider it … 5. With all its … we must acknowledge …

13. Advertisements help people get much information about new products. 1) It is ads that help people get../ It is with the help of ads that people can …. 增分策略五 句式变换 2) It is believed that ads help inform people of new products. 3) If it were not for ads, people wouldn ’ t get … 4) How helpful ads are in providing information for people.

14. With the help of ads, people can get much information about new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Some advertisements educate the public 1.Advertisements benefit us in many ways. … 增分策略六 注重主题句 2.Ads bring a lot of benefits to us. … 3. Advertisements are beneficial to us in many aspects. … 4. Ads are playing an important part / role in our daily life. …

15. With the development of science and technology, people are constantly exposed to ads. Ads benefit us in many ways. It is believed that ads can inform people of new products. Making use of ads, companies can promote the sales of products. Advertisements educate the public. However, there exist some bad effects on our daily life. In the first place, it is a waste of natural resources, increasing the cost of products. In the second place, not only do ads mislead or even cheat consumers but also make us upset and disturbed. As far as I am concerned, advertising is of use. If we are armed with enough facts from ads, it is easy for us to make a much better choice of goods. Appreciating the polished work (123 words)

16. Summary To be complete. To be accurate. To be varied. To be coherent. 三性一复杂 内容的完整性 用词的准确性 篇章的连贯性 句子的复杂度