1. 高考书面表达专题指导 ---- 漫画写作 Writing based on cartoons

2. Describe the picture &interpret its meaning Relate it to reality &give reasons Give opinion &suggestions Structure Para1: Para2 ： Para3:

3. .As is vividly shown/seen/depicted ( 描绘 ) in the picture….The picture indicates/reflects/reveals that we…. What this picture tries to convey is that …. The picture is sending a message that ….Obviously, what the cartoon illustrates is that ….The picture is the exact reflection of… Para1: Describe the picture & interpret its meaning

4. This is an ironical （讽刺的） // vivid cartoon which describes a kind of common phenomenon among… Para2: Relate it to reality & give reasons The following reasons are convincing. …is responsible for the phenomenon. The phenomenon is due to the fact that…

5. Part 2 Interpret its implied meaning // Analyze the reasons//the results 衔接句过渡： This is an ironical （讽刺的） // vivid cartoon which describes a kind of common phenomenon among… The picture is the exact reflection of a common phenomenon existing in our daily life. The picture vividly reflects a common phenomenon in our life. It perfectly exemplifies a social phenomenon. Nowadays… From what the picture illustrates, we can … The picture has a profound significance in our daily life, which indicates the fact that What the picture conveys to us is that … The picture vividly conveys the message that … The following reasons are convincing. …is responsible for the phenomenon. The phenomenon is due to the fact that…

6. neglected Useful expressions: As is vividly seen/shown, there is...doing//... is (are) doing The picture reveals/reflects/illustrates… The picture conveys a message that… 词汇： psychological qualities moral standards Describe the picture and interpret its meaning

7. neglected In the picture, a child is striving for full marks on the road to knowledge. Seeing the child working so hard, his grandma and parents cheer for him and give great encouraging words “Come on”. The picture conveys a message that students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological qualities and moral standards. Tip: use good expressions and complicated structures to arrest attention

8. What are the reasons accounting for this phenomenon? As is vividly depicted in the picture, a boy is forced to take part in a variety of spare-time training courses. Relate it to reality & give reasons 课外培训班

9. As is vividly seen, a boy who is forced to take part in a variety of spare-time training courses is burdened with huge mental pressure. The following reasons are commonly convincing. For one thing, children are often asked to do best in their academic performance. For another, parents expect too much of children, hoping the courses will help children in fierce competitive society. Tip: Add proper linking words and sentences to make it logical and persuasive

10. Para 1:desciption &meaning (Big Group1) As is vividly depicted/shown/seen … It reveals… Para 3 opinion/solution (Big Group 4) As far as I’m concerned, it is advisable/necessary to… Para2: reasons (Big Group 2, 3) It is a common phenomenon among… The following reasons are convincing. … Tips: use complicated structures if possible.非谓语、从句、倒装、 省略、虚拟语气 …

11. Peer evaluation 1. 是否有出彩的表达或句式？ 2. 论述是否有条理和逻辑性？ 3. 是否使用恰当的衔接词、句？ 4. 是否有拼写、时态等语法错误？ 5. 卷面是否清晰整洁？ 第五档次（很好）：（ 25-30 分 Awesome/Excellent Great Good Not bad/Just so so poor

12. 评分标准： 文章是否扣题 ---- 描述与主题一致，自圆其说 结构是否完整 ---- 三部分 内容是否健康 ---- 乐观向上 逻辑是否清晰 ---- 议论要有逻辑性 语言是否准确 ---- 用词恰当，无语法错误 交际是否得体 ---- 情境，身份等

13. As can be seen from the cartoon, two ladies living in the opposite flat say “hello” when they happen to meet each other. The two women don’t know each other even if they have been neighbors for several years. It is the exact reflection of lack of communication in the community. The following reasons account for it. To begin with, with the fast pace of modern society, people are so occupied with work that they would rather stay at home for relaxation. In addition, the high-rise apartments contribute to people’s keeping to themselves. As far as I’m concerned, it’s high time that we took action to put an end to the phenomenon. The community should be encouraged to organize recreational activities together. Moreover, instead of burying themselves in smart phones, citizens should raise the awareness of communicating with others. As a popular song says, “ Only when everybody gives a little love or care to each other will the world become the sea of love.”

14. 漫画作文 —— 高考作文类型之一 小结： 1 、了解漫画作文的特点， 熟悉漫画作文的 套路。 2 、了解书面表达评分标准，学 会自 我评价、给他人评价作文。 Homework ：作文纸上完成、润色其他段落。