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Clear Writing Strategies  Clear writing begins with adapting your message to your specific readers.  All readers do not have same level of vocabulary, knowledge, or values.  So you must tailor your message to your reader.

A Classic example!  An inventor wrote the Bureau of Standards that he had made a great discovery: Hydrochloric acid is good for cleaning clogged drains. He got this response: “The efficacy of hydrochloric acid is indisputable, but the corrosive residue is incompatible with metallic permanence.” Believing that these big words indicated agreement, this not-so-bright inventor wrote back telling how pleased he was that the bureau liked his discovery. The bureaucrat tried again: “ We can not assume responsibility for the production of toxic residue with hydrochloric acid and suggest alternative procedure.” The inventor was even more gratified. He again expressed his appreciation to the bureau for agreeing with him. This time the bureaucrat got the message. He replied I simple words “ Don’t use hydrochloric acid. It’ll eat hell out of pipes.”

WE NEED TO ADAPT TO OUR READER! But how to do it? ~ Visualize your reader. how they think What they know What their educational level is etc. → Then write for them

How to adapt to multiple readers?  Write for the bottom level  Usually this means simplifying the message  Thus the following suggestions stress simplification:

Use short, familiar words  Don’t: In effect, it was hypothesized that certain physical data categories including housing types and densities, land use, characteristics, and ecological location constitute a scale able content area. This could be called a continuum of residential desirability. Likewise, it was hypothesized that several social data categories, describing the same census tracts, and referring generally to the social stratification system of the city, would also be scale able. This scale could be called a continuum of socioeconomic status. Thirdly, it was hypothesized that there would be a high positive correlation between the scale types on each continuum.

Use short, familiar words Do: One can tell from an aerial photograph where rich and poor people live. The rich live in big houses set far apart. The poor live in small houses set close together.

Prefer the short, familiar word Long unfamiliar words  Abbreviate  Accomplish  Approximately  Ascertain  Commence  Considerable  Determine  detrimental  Shorten  Do  About  Find out  Begin  Much  Decide  harmful Long, unfamiliar wordsShort, familiar words

Prefer the short familiar word  Duplicate  Elevation  Equivalent  Fabricate  Furnish  Indeterminate  Indicate  ineffectual  Copy  Height  Equal  Build  Give  Vague  Show  useless Long, unfamiliar wordsShort, familiar words

Prefer short, familiar words  Interrupt  Minimal  Modification  Proceed  Supersede  Ultimate  Visualize  verification  Hinder  Smallest  Change  Go  Replace  Last  Picture  proof Long, unfamiliar wordsShort, familiar words

Use technical language with caution  Has sufficient quarters of coverage to acquire an insured status.  Survivors' benefits  Covered employment  Deceased wage earner  To file a claim  Aged workers  Has worked long enough to become insured  Family insurance payments  A job covered by social security  Worker who has died  To apply for insurance payments  Workers past 65 Technical languageImproved version

Use initials and acronyms with caution  VCR  FDA  CD  IPO  RV  NATO  IRS  Video cassette recorder  Food and drug administration  Certificate of deposit/ compact disc  Initial public offering  Recreational vehicle  North Atlantic Treaty Organization  Internal Revenue Service

Consider the strength and vigor of words  Source of great wealth  Additional compensation  Great loss  Complete failure  Untruth  Put an end to  upraise  Bonanza  Bonus  Disaster  Fiasco  Lie  Destroy  boost weakerstronger

Prefer the concrete to the abstract  We have found that this technique is successful.  Your department may hire some new employees.  We will ship your order soon.  Each of the branch managers will receive a substantial pay rise.  This procedure requires a constant low temperature.  Our research shoes that 87 percent of those using the technique are successful.  Your department may hire three new stock clerks.  We will ship the Moss No 41 desk sets you ordered oct.12 by arrow freight on oct.15.  Each of the branch managers will receive a 15 percent pay rise.  This process requires a constant temperature of 10 degree centigrade. abstractconcrete

Prefer the active to the passive.  It is believed that the bill was padded.  Your report was read by the president.  The profit and loss statement is prepared by the treasurer each month.  It is suggested that you clean the element in warm, soapy water.  It is desired that every effort be made to have this matter brought to the attention of the manager.  I believe they padded the bill.  The president read your report.  The treasurer prepares the profit and loss statement each month.  We suggest that you clean the element in warm, soapy water.  Mr. Wong wants you to bring this matter to the attention of the manager. passive Active

Prefer strong verbs to camouflaged as nouns  Make a classification  Make a computation  Conduct an exploration  Provide information  Engage in negotiation  Make an observation  Provide representation  Classify  Compute  Explore  Inform  Negotiate  Observe  represent Camouflaged verbsStrong verbs

Prefer strong verbs  Cancellation of the order was made on the 12 th.  Elimination of the deficit was brought about by the change.  The management of this office is conducted by Ms. Brown.  Distribution of the special equipment was accomplished by the safety officer.  We cancelled the order on the 12 th.  The change eliminated the deficit.  Ms. Brown manages this office.  The safety officer distributed the special equipment. Camouflaged verbsStrong verb

Choose the precise word  The committee(comprises) (constitutes)representatives from all four sales districts.  This building site cost a large (sum) (amount)of money.  She was (notorious) (noted) for her concern for the poor.  We found no evidence that would (cause) (enable) us to support him.  The management of this store is independent (of) (from) the main office.

Choose the precise word  She (claimed) (maintained) (said) that she was ill.  He is angry (about) (with) the loss.  I will try (to) (and) correct the error.  I differ (with) (from) you on this conclusion.  If he is late I will not wait (for) (on) him longer than ten minutes.  She has an interest (in)( for) technical writing.

Suggestion for Nondiscriminatory Writing:  Rewording to eliminate the offending word  Making the reference plural  Substituting a neutral expression( he or she, he/she, s/he, you, one, person). Avoid sexist pronouns by:

Reword to eliminate the offending word  We will reimburse any employee who paid his travel expenses.  If a customer pays promptly, he is placed on our preferred list.  A physician should treat his patients with respect.  We will reimburse any employee for travel expenses paid.  A customer who pays promptly is placed on our preferred list.  A physician should treat the patients with respect. Sexist Nonsexist

Substitute a neutral expression  If a customer pays promptly, he is placed on our preferred list.  When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, he is subject to dismissal.  A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if he is not negligent.  When a customer needs service, it is his right to ask for it.  If a customer pays promptly, he or she is placed on our preferred list.  When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, he/she is subject to dismissal.  A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if s/he is not negligent.  When service is needed, one has the right to ask for it. SexistNonsexist

Make the reference plural  If a customer pays promptly, he is placed on our preferred list.  When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, he is subject to dismissal.  A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if he is not negligent.  When a customer needs service, it is his right to ask for it.  If a customer pays promptly, they are placed on our preferred list.  When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, they are subject to dismissal.  A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if they are not negligent.  When customers needs service, they have the right to ask for it. sexistnonsexist

Avoid words with a masculine origin  Man-made  Manpower  Congressman  Businessman  Mailman  Policeman  Fireman  Cameraman  Waiter/ waitress  Manufactured, of human origin  Personnel, workers  Representative, member of congress  Business executive, Businessperson  Letter carrier, Mail carrier  Police officer  Fire fighter  Camera operator  server Sexist Nonsexist

Masculine sounding words but no masculine origin  Manufacture  Management  History  Manipulate  Mannequin  Manicure  Mandolin  Histrionic  histamine

Avoid words that lower women’s status  My girl  Lady doctor  Authoress  Actress  Poetess  Sculptress  Male nurse  Male secretary  My secretary  Doctor  Author  Actor  Poet  Sculptor  Nurse  secretary Instead of Use

Generally avoid word that stereotype by :  A hard-working African-American  A brave Gorkhali  Golden ager  youngster Race Age

Generally avoid word that stereotype by :  Deaf and dumb  crippled  Homosexual  Gay  lesbian Disability Sexual orientation

“ Why use two words when one will do ” Thomas Jefferson *“ Write to express, not to impress.” * “90% of writing is re-writing and editing” Thank You.