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ACTIVE AND PASSIVE VOICE OUTCOME 10-2 ALL INFORMATION WAS BORROWED FROM “THE GUIDE TO GRAMMAR AND WRITING” IS THE STATEMENT ABOVE ACTIVE OR PASSIVE?

PASSIVE AND ACTIVE VOICES Verbs are also said to be either active (The executive committee approved the new policy) or passive (The new policy was approved by the executive committee)

THE ACTIVE VOICE In the active voice, the subject and verb relationship is straightforward: the subject is a be-er or a do-er and the verb moves the sentence along. In English, try to write in the active voice. Active: The novel points out… Golding points out The novel demonstrates

THE PASSIVE VOICE In the passive voice, the subject of the sentence is neither a do-er or a be-er, but is acted upon by some other agent or by something unnamed (The new policy was approved).agent Passive: It is pointed out in the novel that…. It is demonstrated in the novel that … It is thought that Brady and Drummond…

NOT RIGHT VS. WRONG—JUST BETTER WORD CHOICE There is nothing inherently wrong with the passive voice, but if you can say the same thing in the active mode, do so. As a result, your writing will have more pizzazz. In English courses, we almost always want to avoid using the passive voice.

WHEN TO CHOOSE THE PASSIVE VOICE The passive voice does exist for a reason, however, and its presence is not always to be despised. The passive is particularly useful,even recommended, in two situations: When it is more important to draw our attention to the person or thing acted upon: The unidentified victim was apparently struck during the early morning hours. When the actor in the situation is not important: The aurora borealis can be observed in the early morning hours.

PASSIVE VOICE EXAMPLES The passive voice is especially helpful,and even regarded as mandatory, in scientific or technical writing or lab reports, where the actor is not really important but the process or principle being described is of ultimate importance. Instead of writing, "I poured 20 cc of acid into the beaker," we would write, "Twenty cc of acid was poured into the beaker." The passive voice is also useful when describing, say, a mechanical process in which the details of process are much more important than anyone's taking responsibility for the action: "The first coat of primer paint is applied immediately after the acid rinse."

AVOIDING RESPONSIBILITY Some use the passive voice to avoid responsibility for actions taken. "Cigarette ads were designed to appeal especially to children" places the burden on the ads, not the manufacturer. — as opposed to "We designed the cigarette ads to appeal especially to children," in which "we“, the manufacturer, accepts responsibility. “Bombs were dropped on innocent civilians, causing many casualities.” –no responsibility to any party involved. who

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