© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center The Writing Process: Preparation and Prewriting Sean McCandless, PhD Candidate Virginia Nichols, M. A.

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center MEAL: Essay Formation M Main Point: Thesis statement E Evidence/Examples from credible sources A Analysis: Interpretation of the evidence L Link to thesis statement and conclusion

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Prewriting: Prospectus/Proposal/Outline Choose a topic Ask research questions Identify research methods/materials Start an annotated bibliography/literature review Develop a working thesis statement

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Choose a Topic Find something about the topic you care about – What you want to know about the topic – Why you want to know Consider the audience and purpose – Who you are addressing – Why you are addressing this audience Consider the perspective – Why it is important

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Create Research Questions Narrow the topic by forming questions – Ask who, what, when, where, why, and/or how – Acknowledge differing opinions or study results Consider the perspective Consider the motivations

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Create Research Questions Why should the U.S. abandon realist foreign policy? – The U.S. should abandon realist foreign policy because this policy often leads the country into unnecessary conflict. This thesis addresses the question of why the U.S. should discontinue a realist foreign policy

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Create Research Questions Why should Congress legislate and limit the use of high-fructose corn syrup? – Congress should limit the use of high-fructose corn syrup in food and beverages because it is linked to high obesity rates in children. This thesis addresses the question of why Congress should legislate the use of high-fructose corn syrup in food and beverages

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Create Research Questions Identify the topic Ask who, what, when, where, why, or how – Be specific – Avoid questions that can be answered with yes or no

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Identify the Research Methods/Materials Primary sources: – Original documents, writings, artwork, etc. such as diaries, paintings, original scientific studies, official government records Secondary sources: – Citing someone who is analyzing someone else – Using someone else’s research

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Research: Approaching Sources Books – Synopses – Book reviews – Introduction – Conclusion – Chapter heading/first paragraph – Indexes – Bibliographic essays Journal Articles – Abstract – Introduction – Conclusion – Literature review – Findings and discussion

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Begin an Outline Establish the topic Create research questions Suggest possible answers Identify probable research methods/materials

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Do the Research Introduce the topic Create questions about the topic Choose the research methods/materials Answer the research questions Develop the annotated bibliography/literature review

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Annotated Bibliography/Literature Review Annotated bibliography: a list of citations followed by one or two brief, descriptive, and evaluative paragraphs. Literature review: an essay that summarizes, surveys, links, and analyzes research for a given topic

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Answer the Research Questions Citing Direct quoting Paraphrasing Synthesizing and analyzing

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Citing Providing attribution for another’s ideas and work Cite as you go – So as not to waste time looking through your sources – To quickly refer back to a source if you need more information – To identify relationships and/or holes in the research

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Plagiarism: What Needs to be Cited Ideas, information and/or structure that are not yours – Quoted material – Paraphrased material – Information that is not “common knowledge” – Reviews by friends/relatives/peers/instructors/specialists Recycling previous work When in doubt, cite

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Direct Quoting Lifting the exact words of the author – “Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth, upon this continent, a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal” (Abraham Lincoln, Gettysburg Address, 1863). – According to Doe (2007), “Realism is a political theory that posits that states seek to maximize power and power projection above all other concerns” (p. 9).

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Paraphrasing Putting someone else’s ideas and words into your own words – Eighty seven years ago, a group of men formed a new country called the United States of America on the North American continent because they believed that all men are born with the same rights and should have access to freedom. – According to realist political theory, the pursuit of power and power maximization is the primary goal of states (Doe, 2007).

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Synthesizing and Analyzing Synthesizing – Understanding what the material/sources mean – Summarizing the content of the material/sources – Explaining what the material/sources mean Analyzing – Understanding how the material works and relates to other information – Determining validity and relevance of the material/sources – Providing an educated and informed opinion

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Elements of a Thesis Statement Contains a claim that others may dispute Includes the reason(s) for making the claim Provides justification (the “So what?” test)

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Purpose of a Thesis Statement Interprets the significance of the subject matter – Interprets a question or subject but is not the subject itself – Answers a research question/s Makes a claim that others might dispute

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Purpose of a Thesis Statement Provides reason(s) for the claim – Often contains words such as while, because, since, so, although, unless, and however Justifies discussion – the “So what?” test Tells the reader what to expect from the rest of the paper: it is the road map for the paper

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Developing Strong Thesis Statements: Questions to Ask Are the research questions answered? Does the essay contain a position that others might challenge? Is the thesis statement specific enough?

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Developing Strong Thesis Statements: Questions to Ask Does the essay follow the roadmap set out in the thesis statement? Does the thesis statement pass the "So what?" test – does it justify the discussion or explain the importance of the topic? Does the thesis statement pass the "how and why" test – does the evidence support the thesis statement?

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Sample Thesis Statement Since pet ownership greatly impacts family life, people should understand the differences between cats and dogs before adopting one. As such, dogs make better pets than cats because dogs are more easily trained, friendlier, and fluffier.

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Sample Thesis Statement Claim: Dogs make better pets than cats… Reasons: because (a) dogs are more easily trained, (b) friendlier, and (c) fluffier. Justification: Since pet ownership greatly impacts family life, people should understand the differences between cats and dogs before adopting one.

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Create A Thesis Statement Make a claim Provide a reason State why this is important

© 2011 by the UCD Writing Center Essential Elements of Essays I.Introduction A.Background B.Thesis Statement: Since pet ownership greatly impacts family life, people should understand the differences between cats and dogs before adopting one. As such, dogs make better pets than cats because they are more easily trained, friendlier, and fluffier. II.Main Point 1: Dogs are more easily trained than cats III.Main Point 2: Dogs are friendlier than cats IV.Main Point 3: Dogs are fluffier than cats V.Conclusion A.Restate Thesis B.Implications/Recommendations