1.Uncle taro gave I pamphlet “Common Sense,” by Thomas Paine. It urged british subjects in the colonies to fight for independence.

1.Uncle Taro gave me a pamphlet “Common Sense,” by Thomas Paine. It urged British subjects in the colonies to fight for independence.

2. After reading it, i said to uncle Taro you were right. The pen really is mightier than the sword”!

2. After reading it, I said to Uncle Taro, “You were right. The pen really is mightier than the sword!”

3. Uncle Taro asked me if i thought “Civil Disobedience,” by henry david thoreau, was the greatest essay ever written?

3. Uncle Taro asked me if I thought “Civil Disobedience,” by Henry David Thoreau, was the greatest essay ever written?

4. Perhaps that there work inspired Martin Luther King Jr., another activist to write his famous “Letter from Birmingham Jail.”

4. Perhaps that work inspired Martin Luther King Jr., another activist, to write his famous “Letter from Birmingham Jail.”

5. Rosmara said that her feelings about pesticides, weedkillers and polluteion grew stronger after reading Rachel Carson’s book Silent Spring.

5. Rosmara said that her feelings about pesticides, weed killers and pollution grew stronger after reading Rachel Carson’s book Silent Spring.

6. Rachel carson were a scientist and author whose books made me and Rosmara think about how our actions affect the environment.

6. Rachel Carson was a scientist and author whose books made Rosmara and me think about how our actions affect the environment.

7. Jacob Riis as you know wrote news articles that exposed horrible living conditions and a polluted water supply in New York New york.

7. Jacob Riis, as you know, wrote news articles that exposed horrible living conditions and a polluted water supply in New York, New York.

8. Susan B. anthony, who fighted hard to win women’s right to vote, published a weekly newspaper called The Revolution.

8. Susan B. Anthony, who fought hard to win women’s right to vote, published a weekly newspaper called The Revolution.

9. Rosemara and me agree that activists have the most greatest impact on these kinds of issues civil rights, human rights, and the environment.

9. Rosemara and I agree that activists have the greatest impact on these kinds of issues: civil rights, human rights, and the environment.

10. “I thinks,” Rosemara said the issues of civil rights and raceial justices are that most important of all.”

10. “I think,” Rosemara said, “the issues of civil rights and racial justices are the most important of all.”