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doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 2 Abstract This presentation summarizes the changes made in the Clause 11A.7 of the IEEE P802.11s TM /D1.03 draft for the updated RA-OLSR texts in referring to the comment resolution spreadsheet, IEEE 11-07/0023r26.

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 3 Comment Category Session

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 4 Comment Categories ① Clarification/Correction 1307, 1037, 1308, 1550, 1554, 1556, 1557, 1558, 1559, 1565, 1566, 2160, 2366, 2783, 3374, 3384, 3392, 3395, 3405, 3406, 3407, 3819, 4120, 4145, 4146, 4244, 4246, 4248, 4556, 4559, 4565, 5046, 5049, 5054, 5056, 5058, 5059, 5062, 5063, 5068, 5070, 5072, 5073, 5074, 5079, 5087, 5089, 5093, 5415, 5423, 5437, 5471, 5472, 5474, 5475, 5491, 5704 ② Parameters 1562, 3650, 4608, 4609, 4610, 5060, 5069, 5071, 5498, 5499, 5512, 5708, 5709, 5710, 5711, 5712, 5713 ③ Element Format, 35, 2362, 2364 ④ Operations (Basic/Proxy) 562, 682, 1525, 1553, 2161, 2787, 3649, 3651, 4605, 4606, 4607, 5382, 5697, 5698, 5699, 5700, 5701, 5702, 5703, 5705, 5706, 5707 ⑤ Jan’s Comments 2049, 2085

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 5 RA-OLSR Comments Total comments: 101 Comment categories: ① RA-OLSR Clarification/Correction (57) ② RA-OLSR Parameters (17) ③ RA-OLSR Element Format (3) ④ RA-OLSR Operations (Basic/Proxy) (22) ⑤ RA-OLSR Jan’s Comments (2)

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 6 (1) RA-OLSR Clarification/Correction Descriptions: this category is comprised of comments related to unclear explanation, grammatical/inconsistencies, and informative/normative for the RA- OLSR, not its specification. Main issues raised by commenters: –Too many normative statements, the usage of “will,” “can,” and “must” –The information is not appropriate in this sub-clause –“These are transmitted periodically.” does not make sense to specify procedures –Explanation of the fields need to be more precise and clear –Either remove the procedure description in clause 7 or move it to appropriate places –Routing terminologies are not all clearly defined –Explanation of IE processing and forwarding need to be more precise and clear Expected resolutions: –Add informative statements, and replace with may/should/shall –Incorporate the comments of this sub-clause in the appropriate place –Replace this sentence with better one –A submission that improves IE formats ( of P802.11s TM /D1.03) –A submission that improves definitions (11A of P802.11s TM /D1.03) –Reorganize and modify the explanation of IE processing and forwarding

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 7 (2) RA-OLSR Parameters Descriptions: This category is comprised of comments related to parameters and values for RA-OLSR Main issues raised by commenters: –Specify Htime, HELLO interval, etc –The parameter does not appear other than this clause Expected resolution: –Provide specification to the related comments –If this is not defined in this document, define it

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 8 (3) RA-OLSR Element Format Descriptions: This category is comprised of comments related to non-technical issues of the element format specification for RA-OLSR Main issues raised by commenters: –Explain the HELLO, TC, etc –Explain the fields of elements more precise and clear Expected resolution: –Provide explanation and specification to the related comments

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 9 (4) RA-OLSR Operations (Basic/Proxy) Descriptions: This category is comprised of comments related to the technical, content, and fundamental function of the RA-OLSR Main issues raised by commenters: –Explanation of element processing and forwarding need to be more precise and clear when RA-OLSR is applied –Full base diffusion and checksum diffusion –Configurations of portal and interworking are not clearly specified. –Explain HELLO element processing for link sensing –Explain TC element forwarding and processing for multi-radio MPs Expected resolution: –A submission that improves Full base diffusion and checksum diffusion –A submission that improves RA-OLSR when portal is configured –Provide resolution for element processing and forwarding

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 10 (5) RA-OLSR Jan’s Comments Descriptions: This category contains comments that raise by Jan on the specification of RA-OLSR, not its specification Main issues raised by commenters: –Jan raised to remove RA-OLSR Expected resolution: –RA-OLSR has its own advantages

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 11 Comment Resolution Session

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 12 RA-OLSR Comments Resolved CategoryTotalOpenClosed%Closed 1. Clarification/Correction % 2. Parameters % 3. Element Format % 4. Operations (Basic/Proxy) % 5. Jan’s Comments2200.0% Total : %

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 13 Type of Comment Resolution CategoryTotalAcceptDeferRejectCounter 1. Clarification/Correction 57 (28): 1037, 2366, 2783, 3392, 3395, 4559, 4565, 5046, 5049, 5054, 5056, 5058, 5059, 5062, 5063, 5072, 5074, 5079, 5087, 5089, 5093, 5415, 5423, 5471, 5472, 5474, 5475, 5491 (25): 1307, 1308, 1550, 1554, 1556, 1557, 1558, 1559, 1565, 1566, 3374, 3384, 3405, 3406, 3407, 3819, 4120, 4145, 4146, 4244, 4246, 4248, 4556, 5073, 5704 (2): 5068, 5070 (2): 2160, Parameters 17 (7): 1562, 4608, 4609, 5060, 5708, 5711, 5712 (6): 5069, 5071, 5498, 5499, 5512, 5709 (1): 5713(3): 3650, 4610, Element Format 3 (3): 35, 2362, 2364(0): 4. Operations (Basic/Proxy) 22 (9): 562, 2161, 2787, 3651, 4605, 5697, 5700, 5705, 5706 (8): 682, 1525, 1553, 4607, 5698, 5701, 5702, 5707 (0):(5): 3649, 4606, 5382, 5699, Jan’s Comments 2 (0):(2): 2049, 2085(0): Total :

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 14 Conclusion Expected resolutions: –Correction, clarification, informative/normative of the current RA-OLSR draft. –Clarify the parameters and values. –Submissions that improve basic and proxy operations. –Reorganize and modify the explanation of element generation, processing, and forwarding. Accomplishments until 9 May 2007 –101 comments are categorized –47-Accept, 41-Defer, 3-Reject, and 10-Counter Work in progress –RA-OLSR Clarification/Correction –RA-OLSR Operations (Basic/Proxy)

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 15 References 1.IEEE P802.11s TM /D1.03 Draft STANDARD for Information Technology - Telecommunications and information exchange between systems - Local and metropolitan area networks - Specific requirements - Part 11: Wireless LAN Medium Access Control (MAC) and Physical Layer (PHY) specifications: Amendment: ESS Mesh Networking 2.Comments Resolution of IEEE P802.11s, 11-07/0023r26 3.A.O Lim et al., “Updated Texts for Clause 11A.7 RA- OLSR,” 11-07/0627r0

doc.: IEEE /0626r0 Submission May 2007 A.O. Lim et al.Slide 16 Motion Adopt document 11-07/0627r0 to resolve the following comments related to the RA-OLSR comments: –CID … Moved by: Second by: Result (Yes/No/Abstain):