Correcting a Run – On Sentence There are many ways to correct a run-on sentences Lets start with the three best ways
Separate the two ideas into two sentences It was wonderful weather in Monday the boy flew the kite outside Separate the two ideas : It was a wonderful weather on Monday -the boy flew the kite outside.
Add punctuation and separate ! Correct the punctuation and the capitalization and now have two complete sentence It was wonderful weather on Monday .The boy flew the kite outside .
Coordinating Conjunctions For And Nor But Or Yet So
Using FANBOYS to Connect FANBOYS connects the two sentences together . Don't forget to add a comma befor the FANBOYS!
Example It was wonderful weather on Monday the boy flew the kite outside. (run-on) It was wonderful weather on Monday , So the boy flew the kite outside
YOU CANNOT DO THIS WITH A COMMA !! The Semicolon ; is known as the semicolon. You can use this symbol to join two sentences without it being a run-on sentence . YOU CANNOT DO THIS WITH A COMMA !!
Example The book was very interesting the main character died in the last scene! (run-on) The book was very interesting ; the main character died in the last scene
You may only use a semicolon if the two sentences are closely related. Exception to the rule You may only use a semicolon if the two sentences are closely related.
Is This Correct? Can you fix this run-on sentence by adding a semicolon ? It is a wonderful weather on Monday ; the boy flew the kite outside . Are the sentences closely related ?
Think Back.... Think back to this example : The book was very interesting ; the main character died in the last scene ! These two sentences are very closely related and therefore you can use a semicolon .
Let’s Practice!! Try using a FANBOYS I love going to Disney World my family wants to visit Disney Land . I love going to the Disney World , but my family wants to visit Disney Land .
Try using a semicolon ; Daisy is a great singer someday she will be in a famous band ! Daisy is a great singer ; someday she will be in a famous band !
Try forming 2 sentences . Andrea to roller blade after school she hates hates to ride her bike . Andrea loves to roller blade after school . She hates hates to ride her bike .