How to become a GREAT peer editor!

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How to become a GREAT peer editor! In 6 Easy Steps

What is peer editing? Peer editing is a process by which students read each others work and make suggestions for improvement. Peer editing is a an opportunity for constructive feed back and collaboration

Peer Editing is Not... Rewriting a paper for the person for whom you are editing An opportunity to be overly critical and bring another person down About judging content – though a peer editor may make suggestions about ideas being explored, it is not their place to say whether the content is right/wrong, good/bad

Peer editing is helpful because... One of the necessary requirements for good editing is distance. This means that sometimes after you have worked on a piece of writing for a period time, you lose your ability to see mistakes. Also, it becomes difficult to determined areas where you can improve.

Peer editing is helpful because... Your classmates have the appropriate distance from your work. They are not personally connected to it in the same way you are and can, therefore, be objective.

Peer editing is helpful because... Everyone is good at different things! Though you may be very imaginative and have a great vocabulary, perhaps you struggle with proper punctuation. Finding a peer editing who has different strengths than yours will help you to produce a piece that is equally well written in all areas.

Your Job as a Peer Editor Your #1 job as a peer editor is to offer your peers constructive criticism. What is constructive criticism? Helpful and specific suggestions about where and how the writer can improve their piece .

SO...HOW DO YOU DO THAT?

STEP #1: READ Read the paper carefully from beginning to end. You need to get a clear sense of what has been written in its entirety BEFORE you start looking at specifics parts of the piece to discuss

STEP #2: REREAD Read the paper a second time This time think about the piece’s strengths and weaknesses REMEMBER: Constructive Criticism must be SPECIFIC

STEP #3: COMPLIMENTS Tell your peer what they did well: Your strengths as a writer are ________ This part was excellent because… Your strongest section is ________ This was really intriguing because… I liked the way you_________ NOTE: Students often have the compulsion to tell their classmates that their writing is “Good” “Great” or “Fantastic”. However, if their writing actually needs work, I will not be telling them that it is “Good” Great” or “Fantastic”. Therefore, you will have done them a real disservice by not being honest with them.

STEP #4: SUGGESTIONS Make Suggestions – identify specific areas that need the author’s attention It’s important to remember that even though you are being critical, you should remain positive and frame your comments accordingly. Ex. Instead of, “It doesn’t make sense,” say something like: “Right now I’m having trouble understanding what you mean but if you explain it more fully it might become clear.”

STEP #4: SUGGESTIONS Here are some areas that you may want to make suggestions about: CREATIVE WRITING Elements of Creative Writing – How well were the characters developed? Were the descriptions engaging? Is the dialogue believable? Emotional Impact – Did the piece make a connections with the reader? ESSAY Thesis – Is the thesis argument clear, very specific, and arguable? Examples – Did the author choose strong examples to support their points? Topic – Does the author stick to the topic or talk about other things that don’t relate to their argument?

STEP #4: SUGGESTIONS ALL PIECES: Organization - Can you understand what the author is trying to say? Are the ideas presented in an effective way? Word Choice - Did the author choose appropriate words? Are their words that would be more effective if they were used instead? Sentences – Are the sentences too long or too short?

STEP #5: CORRECTIONS Identify mechanical mistakes such as: Spelling Errors Typos Punctuation Errors (periods, commas, semicolons etc) Sentence Errors (run on sentences, sentence fragments) ***Make sure that these corrections are made in a different colour than the one the document is written in

If your receive peer editing, you should.. look over the comments and corrections carefully. think about comments objectively and then re-read your paper carefully before deciding which suggestions you will follow and which suggestions you will ignore. Ultimately this paper, the piece of writing you are submitting is your responsibility, and as such, it is your decision to make decisions about what revision should be made.

REMEMBER PEER EDITING CAN BE AN ENJOYABLE AND POSTIVIE EXPERIENCE IF: Editors don’t just tell their peers what they want to hear Editors offer specific constructive criticism Authors review and consider the suggestions of editors before making changes to the piece they have written