This I Believe Day 3 Topics and Organization My examples Edit your essays

Analyzing: Accomplishing Big Things… Please look at my: 1. ingredients notes on the left 2. organization notes on the right 3.Sentence structure notes in the middle

Analyzing: Finding a Good Frog Please creates your own notes: 1. ingredients notes on the left 2. organization notes on the right 3.sentence structure notes in the middle

Let just say your topic is: I believe that youth should participate in politics. 1.What could you include (ingredients)? 2.How would you orchestrate it (organization)?

Let’s just say your topic is: I believe that not having a plan for everything is a very good thing. 1.What could you include (ingredients)? 2.How would you orchestrate it (organization)?

Editing Protocol At your set of tables: 1.Begin by taking turns discussing what you attempted to do in this essay. 2.Next, take turns reading you essay aloud. Part of the craftsmanship of this piece is to match the sound and the structure. Writer, pay attention to places in the essay that do not sound right to you. 3.Listeners take turns offering comments on the read essay to improve its flow and power / poignancy 4.After all essays have been read aloud and verbal comments have been made, trade essays in order to provide technical feedback.

Ingredients to consider: Narrative Visual elements (show versus tell) Character, setting, action Dialogue Anecdote and personal experience Expository Rhetorical questions (use sparingly) Examples Statistics Figurative Language Simile Metaphor Hyperbole Analogy

And Last… The final draft of this essay is due to turnitin.com on Friday at midnight.