1. castle,’ an old, dark, scary looking place that we tried to avoid. I told him to stay there. After Sarah had passed, I went back to get my brother. He was gone. A Babysitting Nightmare Continue… It all started when my mom asked me to take my younger brother out for Halloween. I didn’t want to, but I had no choice if I wanted to play with my friends on Saturday. I told Tommy to stay with me. Everything was fine until I saw Sarah. Sarah was the cutest girl in school- I couldn’t let her see me with my little brother. I pushed Tommy behind the hedge of ‘the

2. As I turned to walk away I heard a scream. “Tommy!” I yelled. The scream came from behind the door. The door was unlocked, so I went in … I had to find him. He must have gone up to the door of the castle looking for candy. Maybe he was inside I thought. I ran up to the door and knocked. No one answered. I knocked once more … no answer. Click on the door to enter.

3. Tommy was in here somewhere and I had to find him. Ahead of me were two doors. It looked like one door went up into the attic and the other down into the basement. Which one should I go through? Click on this door to enter the basement. Click on this door to enter the attic.

4. Click to go back. I entered the attic… It was dark and I couldn’t see anything, the only light was from the moon. I walked farther in and I saw Chuckee sitting in the corner… Should I stay and play with it or walk away? Story Map- Delete Play Walk Away

5. Click to go back. I entered the basement… The basement was old and had cob webs everywhere. Next thing I know I’m in a something wet. I look and it’s a pool of fruit punch but then I heard the scream again…Should I follow the scream or stay and play in the fruit punch pool? Story Map- Delete Scream Play

6. Story Map- Delete I decide to stay and play with it and it wasn’t a very good idea. I walked over and sat down with it, it started going ballistic on me. I ended up back outside without my brother and bruises all over. BAD

7. Story Map- Delete I walked away from the doll and walked back farther in the room. I heard a faint scream and didn’t know what to do at the moment… Should I follow the scream or get the heck out of there? Scream Get Out

8. Story Map- Delete I decided I was going to be self-centered and play in the fruit punch and all of a sudden something grabbed my foot. I didn’t know what to do but open my eyes and see who it was. It was my little brother covered in red dye and we walked out of there like nothing happened in the first place. Good

9. Story Map- Delete I followed the scream and got out of the pool of fruit punch. There were two other doors I had to go through to get to that scream but I didn’t know which one to take… Should I take door #1 or door #2? Door 1 Door 2

10. Story Map- Delete I followed the scream and there was my brother sitting there all tied up with an apple in his mouth so he couldn’t talk. I got him untied and the apple out of his mouth. We got out of there as fast as we could and we never spoke about it again. But he was kind of mad at me for leaving him. Good

11. Story Map- Delete I tried getting out but as I wanted to I tripped and was laying in trap door that had swung down from pressure. I looked up and there was the doll again and he had closed the door. I was trapped. BAD

12. Story Map- Delete I opened door #1 and saw my brother lying on his stomach. He was breathing. He woke up from the door and said, “I got tired. “ We both walked back home after that and never spoke of it again. GOOD

13. Story Map- Delete I opened door #2 and it was pretty dark with one blinking light. I see a giant man holding a spoon in his hand while there is another one behind me. I scream and take off but end up tripping in the pool of fruit punch and then they grab both of my feet and drag me out. Without my brother. BAD