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2 Right from the Beginning… Introduction to the Flee Map Created by Mrs. Senko Write

3 What is a flee map anyway? A flee map is just another type of graphic organizer. We use all sorts of different graphic organizers everyday. Venn Diagram Main idea 123456abcde Bubble Map Tell your neighbor the name of one type of graphic organizer QUICK!!!!

4 Why do I need to use one? Why can’t I just write my rough draft? You need to get all your ducks in a row!

5 Ideas are like a hurricane in your head. Thoughts just swirl around… Great ideas pop in and then suddenly disappear… If you don’t write them down right away they may disappear for good. The flee map will help you capture the good ideas and arrange them so that your essay makes sense.

6 Okay so fill it out… Looks simple right? Just kidding!

7 The longest journey begins with a simple step.… What is the prompt asking? What is the topic of your essay? Write that informatio n right there! What are the big ideas? What are the main ideas of your essay? Write that informatio n here! And here! Step 1 - Draw a donut - aka a circle map.

8 Looking at your circle map, pick one big idea and write it on the line labeled Main Idea I. Find Main Idea I on your flee map.

9 Looking at your circle map, pick one big idea and write it on the line labeled Main Idea II. 1st Big Idea

10 Looking at your circle map, pick one big idea and write it on the line labeled Main Idea III. 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea

11 Looking at your circle map, pick one big idea and write it on the line labeled Main Idea IV. That wasn’t so bad now, was it? You can set your circle map aside now, but do not lose it! You must turn it in with your final copy 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea

12 Put your thinking caps on it is now time to write a few sentences. Allow me to introduce… The Introduction!!!! 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea Check it out the directions are written right on your flee map!

13 The grabber sentence should hook or capture the readers attention. It should “grab” Their attention. You might consider writing a RHETORICAL question. Write that sentence here. 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea

14 Now you will write a sentence about Main Idea I. Write that sentence HERE! Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea

15 Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Now you will write a sentence about Main Idea II. Write that sentence HERE! 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea

16 Now you will write a sentence about Main Idea III. Write that sentence HERE! Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea

17 Now you will write a sentence about Main Idea IV. Write that sentence HERE! Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea

18 Congratulations!!! You have completed your introduction. The next step does not require sentences just words and phrases. Details, details, details and more DETAILS!!! 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea Find box A on your flee map. It is under your 1st Big Idea. Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV *

19 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Find box B on your flee map. It is under your 1st Big Idea.

20 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Find box C on your flee map. It is under your 1st Big Idea.

21 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Find box D on your flee map. It is under your 1st Big Idea.

22 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * Main Idea IV * EXCELLENT !! LET’S MOVE FORWARD

23 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Your conclusion is very similar to your introduction. You are going to rewrite each sentence in your introduction AND you are going to choose ONE detail from each box to enhance the sentence and summarize your essay. Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III *

24 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III *

25 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL *

26 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL *

27 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL *

28 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL *

29 Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion *

30 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * LAST STEP!!!! Fill in your Transitional Phrases. For example: First, Second, Next, Last OR To begin, Next, Then, Finally

31 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * FirstSecondFinally CONGRATULATI ONS!! You have completed your Flee Map. You are now ready to write your rough draft Next

32 The Rough Draft

33 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAI * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * The good news is that almost half of your rough draft is already written. Before you do anything else, get a blank sheet of lined paper and write your name and number on it. Step 1: Copy the introduction from your Flee Map. Yes! I mean copy it! Rewrite it on the lined paper word for word. FirstSecondFinallyNext You have done great work and you want to get credit for it.

34 Step 2: Use the first Transitional phrase to begin a paragraph about Main Idea I. Then write one sentence about each detail you have listed in box A. YOUR NAME & # Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A Finally write one sentence that sums up the whole paragraph. 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAI * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * FirstSecondFinallyNext

35 YOUR NAME & # Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B Step 3: Use the second Transitional phrase to begin a paragraph about Main Idea II. Then write one sentence about each detail you have listed in box B. Finally write one sentence that sums up the whole paragraph. 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAI * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * FirstSecondFinallyNext

36 YOUR NAME & # Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C Step 4: Use the third Transitional phrase to begin a paragraph about Main Idea III. Then write one sentence about each detail you have listed in box C. Finally write one sentence that sums up the whole paragraph. 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAI * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * FirstSecondFinallyNext

37 YOUR NAME & # Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D Step 5: Use the fourth Transitional phrase to begin a paragraph about Main Idea IV. Then write one sentence about each detail you have listed in box D. Finally write one sentence that sums up the whole paragraph. 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAI * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * FirstSecondFinallyNext

38 Step 1: Copy the closing from your Flee Map. Yes! I mean copy it! Rewrite it on the lined paper word for word. YOUR NAME & # Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st Big Idea2nd Big Idea3rd Big Idea4th Big Idea 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail 1st detail 2nd detail 3rd detail Grabber SENTENCE * Grabber SENTENCE * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea I WITH A DETAI * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea II WITH A DETAIL * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence* Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Grabber sentence * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea I * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea II * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea III WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Main Idea IV WITH A DETAIL * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * Your Opinion * FirstSecondFinallyNext

39 YOUR NAME & # Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction Introduction A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B B C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C C D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing Closing That wasn’t so bad, was it? Give yourself a round of applause. Give yourself a pat on the back! Now you can put your Flee Map away, but do not lose it. You must turn it in with your final copy.

40 Now you will need a partner BUT choose your partner carefully. Your best friend might be fun to work with, but are they good at spelling? You need someone who can help you improve your paper. Their work will affect your grade so Choose carefully!

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