1. Chapter 5 Memoirs: Recalling Personal Experience

2. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 2 Chapter Overview Examines the genre of memoirs, which make personal experiences significant to others Presents three readings Examines the writing process in analyzing a student sample

3. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 3 Memoirs as a Genre The writer looks at events, people, and places from the past to re-create significant moments. The resulting story makes an effort to connect with its readers. A memoir is an act of self-discovery; objects such as photographs, journals, and letters serve as reminders.

4. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 4 Writing Strategies Re-creating experience, Annie Dillard’s “An American Childhood” 138 A moment of revelation, Gary Soto’s “Black Hair” page 142 Using episodes, Gail Caldwell’s “Teenage Angst in Texas” page 150

5. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 5 More about Memoirs Rely on memory Put a person’s experiences into a larger historical or cultural context Connect with the past—inform and entertain Also fulfill responsibility to “bear witness” to events or realities that might be forgotten

6. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 6 Term: Head Note A head note is the short paragraph that follows the author’s name and title of the reading, and comes before the reading itself. It includes biographical information about the author (with details on his or her education, credentials, career, and listing publications, for example).

7. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 7 Why Read Head Notes? They help you understand the author, and provide insight into why he or she might have written about the topic in this way. They put the reading into context, referring to the specific historical time and place of the writing.

8. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 8 Why Read Head Notes, cont. Look at the first essay, written by Gary Soto, a noted author, about his first experience with hard physical work. How do the details presented in the head note convey the message that he now makes his living doing the second kind of work—the one using the mind?

9. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 9 Annie Dillard, From “An American Childhood” How does the opening paragraph, with the description of flinging yourself at someone, set the mood for the story? What happens as the story begins, and what unexpected consequence catches the children by surprise? What happens when the driver catches up with Annie and her friend? Why is she excited?

10. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 10 Gary Soto, “Black Hair” How old was he when this story took place, and why is that important? What is the story about? Where does the title come from? See pages 142-149 for the reading, and follow- up questions.

11. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 11 Gail Caldwell, “Teenage Angst in Texas” How does Gail Caldwell establish her situation in the opening paragraph? How does your experience reading Caldwell’s episodes compare to the chronological order in Annie Dillard and Gary Soto’s?

12. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 12 Writing in a Digital World Personal home pages in part resemble individual scrapbooks. Like memoirs, they capture a person at a point in time. But they are also links in online social networks, connecting individuals in virtual communities.

13. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 13 Visual Design The chapter features an excerpt from Marjane Satrapi’s graphic novel Persepolis: The Story of a Childhood. Memoir of growing up in Iran during the Islamic revolution

14. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 14 Writing Assignment Write an essay about a significant event, place, or person in your life. More details are found on pages 157-158; your instructor will let you know whether your class will be doing this particular assignment, and provide you with additional guidelines.

15. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 15 Use Techniques to Select Detail Select details that will help to make you re-creation of the past memorable to readers. Sketching can be used to recall details, sensory impressions, emotional associations, and social allegiances of past moments. Consider both your perspective in the past moment and your present perspective as you think back upon the moment. Do research to fill-in and verify accurate historical details.

16. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 16 Planning and Drafting Your Essay A scratch list (outline) or map may be useful to help remember details. See guidelines in the text to help you develop storyline, describe characters, and add dialogue. Begin drafting by focusing on telling the story.

17. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 17 Get Feedback Peer editing refers to exchanging drafts with another student (by using hard copy, saving to a shared folder, or attaching to an e-mail). Before you do, take time to analyze your draft; see the questions on page 164-165. Peer editors should give positive, constructive comments as much as possible. Peer commentary refers to giving written feedback; see the questions on page 165.

18. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 18 Revising Goes beyond “fixing” punctuation or spelling errors to look more at the content. Relook, rethink, rewrite: Is the memoir fully developed, or do I need to strengthen the ending? Have I either told or shown the reader the significance of this event, person, or place?

19. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 19 Jennifer Plante (student sample) What is her topic? What sensory details does she use? What was the regular routine at her grandparents’ house? What was the conversation she recalls, and how did it affect her father? Notice her commentary, pages 166-170.

20. Copyright © Houghton Mifflin Company. All rights reserved.5 | 20 Student Companion Website Go to the student side of the Web site for exercises, chapter overviews, and links to writing resources for this chapter: http://college.hmco.com/pic/trimbur4e