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漫画作文讲解. 漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤: 读图 读图 ---1. 仔细观察图片 2. 认真阅读提示句子 解意 解意 --- 联系生活,辨明褒贬,反映现象 谋篇 --- Part I --- Part II --- Part III --- 图画描写 ( 4-5 句) (过渡句)反映现象( 1 句)

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Presentation on theme: "漫画作文讲解. 漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤: 读图 读图 ---1. 仔细观察图片 2. 认真阅读提示句子 解意 解意 --- 联系生活,辨明褒贬,反映现象 谋篇 --- Part I --- Part II --- Part III --- 图画描写 ( 4-5 句) (过渡句)反映现象( 1 句)"— Presentation transcript:

1 漫画作文讲解

2 漫画作文、图片作文写作步骤: 读图 读图 ---1. 仔细观察图片 2. 认真阅读提示句子 解意 解意 --- 联系生活,辨明褒贬,反映现象 谋篇 --- Part I --- Part II --- Part III --- 图画描写 ( 4-5 句) (过渡句)反映现象( 1 句) -- 原因或后果 (4-5 句) 个人看法 (解决方法)( 2-3 点)

3 漫画作文谋篇 —— 三步走 拿到漫画类作文,首先精读文字部分,确定写作 主题,其次根据中文提示,按照 “ 描述图片 ”“ 联系 生活 ”“ 个人见解 ” 三步走战略来谋篇。 1. 紧扣漫画主题,描述图片 (. 抓住画面有效信息,合理发挥想象 尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构 确立人称、时态) 2 、由图画到生活 (特点:把握漫画的寓意,揭示事件的本质或 分析问题产生的原因) 3. 个人见解 提出对策

4 Part 1 Describe the picture As is vividly shown in the picture, … As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above,.. As we can see in the picture… The picture is trying to tell us that … In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing… The picture above is about … …Let’s look at the picture above/first.

5 From the picture we can see a cat standing by a water pipe that is pouring waste water into the river. Obviously the cat represents the government official who monitors the environmental protection. When he is asked why the water is so dirty, he replies that the more developed the economy, the dirtier the water.

6 Practise !

7 Practise As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a student is trying his best to reach the full score of important subjects including English, maths, physics, and Chinese while neglecting the more important aspects such as psychological quality and moral standards. This drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought- provoking.

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9 As is shown in the picture, a woman carrying a child is standing on the bus, struggling to keep a balance. The people sitting on the seats pretend to look out of the windows, wearing an indifferent expression on the face, which leaves the woman helpless. As is betrayed in the drawing above, standing in the middle of the bus is a mother carrying a child, who is ignored by the other passengers seated on their own seats. There is a picture which shows us a true scene on a bus.What we can see from the picture is that a mother with a baby in her arms is standing dangerously while all the people on the bus ignore her as if nothing is associated with themselves.

10 In the picture, all the seats are ________. A mother carrying her litter baby ___________ unsteadily, _______ to keep her balance. _____________, a young girl is sitting and looking out of the window, __________not to see them.________________, all the other passengers alike are __________________to such a scene. occupied is standing trying Beside her pretending At the same time turning a blind eye

11 Part 2 Interpret the picture 必背常用过渡句 It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of… The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that… This is a satirical ( 讽刺的 ) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among… This picture reflects a common phenomenon that… This phenomenon is especially common in…

12 The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought-provoking. What the picture wants to stress is that some people in society are -----. There’s no denying that the picture shows a real phenomenon in society. This picture is thought-provoking and what it reflects is an increasing phenomenon in our society, one that should be given serious thought to. This has become a common phenomenon in our country, which we should give serious thoughts to.

13 How poor the child is! His life is supposed to be colourful and meaningful. Studying should be only part of his life. He needn’t work round the clock, which is not good for his growth and development. Just as the old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. He deserves a happy childhood as other kids. Part II : 反应现象,原因

14 What is really shown in the picture is the fact that children are faced with more and more homework and higher level of stress of study, and are tired both physically and mentally. They are too young to put up with this. Parents and teachers push the children to memorize pieces of information aimlessly, which does great harm to them both physically and mentally.

15 Part 3 Give your opinions I think/believe that As far as I’m concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, must have to Do/Don’t… be supposed to… It is better/advisable to… I consider it necessary… Only in this way can we…. Only with combined efforts can we…

16 Part III 个人观点(做法) Nowadays, in China this is a common phenomenon, which is deeply rooted in the education system. What we need to do is make some immediate changes. The society, schools and families shouldn’t put too much pressure on children and should give them enough time to take part in social activities. Only in this way can children be set free and live a happy life.

17 下图描绘的是目前许 多孩子的苦恼,请你 根据对下面这幅漫画 的理解用英语写一篇 短文,描述一下造成 这种现象的原因并发 表你的看法。 Consolidation:

18 The picture shows the helplessness facing many children in China. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. He is forced to put aside what he really likes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest. This is a satirical cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon facing many children. As we all know, many families have only one child, so parents put much expectation on children. They want to equip their children with all kinds of knowledge and skills so that children can be well prepared for the challenges of the future. In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning students shouldn’t be forced to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than expected!

19 第七部分 书面表达(共 l 题,满分 15 分) 假如你是一名高三学生, 最近你看了一则央视公益广告 Family 且深有感触。 请用英语根据下面的图给你校英语报写一篇立志学习, 感恩父母的文章, 描述图片要表达的内容和意义并谈谈你的感受。 注意 : 1. 词数 150 左右, 开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数。

20 As is vividly shown in the picture, the word family represents three people, who are father, mother and I. When I was young,father was the most important person in my family. Mother took good care of me and protected me from wind and rain. Later, I grow up. I take on the responsibility to look after my aged father and weak mother. I realize that the family also means father and mother I love you.

21 The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought- provoking. Undoubtedly, as to our parents,we are the world. There’s no denying the fact that our parents have made a lot of sacrifices. It is high time that we took measures to show gratitude to our parents. In the first place, we may as well spare no effort to study hard, making their sacrifices paid off. What’s more, we should not take our parents’ love for granted. Instead, we are supposed to appreciate it from the bottom of our hearts. Last but not least, the picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden

22 From my point of view, we ought to show our affection for our beloved parents. Now it is time for us to do what we can in return for their hard work. What we shall do now is study hard and make progress in our study. Only in this way can we live up to their high expectations and take better care of our aged parents in the future.

23 下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。 请根据你对这幅照片的理解用英语写一篇短文。 你的短文应包含以下内容: 1. 描述照片内容,如情景、人物、动作,等等; 2. 结合自身实际,谈谈你的感想; 3. 举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。 注意: 1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示, 作必要的发挥想象。 2. 词数 150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. 2011 年江苏高考

24 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received little attention, especially from their own children. The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder. In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels. All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best. But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay my attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help with the everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least prepare breakfast myself, so as to share mother's daily burden. The picture convinces me it is even more important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.


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