1. Learning Intention Read ‘A Hanging’ by George Orwell. Determine what the main theme of the essay is. Begin to analyse language and effect – and consider how to make your own writing better.

2. Born in East India in 1903 Worked in Burma as part of the Indian Imperial Police. Famous for ‘Animal Farm’ and ‘1984’. ‘A Hanging’ is taken from a collection of essays entitled ‘Burmese Days’.

3. Theme What is the main message? What are the big ideas of the essay? Genre What kind of text is it? Setting Where is it set? When is it set? Why is this relevant? Character Who is the main character? Who else features? Why? Plot What happens?

4. Narrative Structure First/Second/Third person Circular/Development/foreshadowing/flashback Imagery Personification Metaphor Simile Onomatopoeia Alliteration Sentence Structure Punctuation Word order Sentence length Repetition Lists Word Choice

5. It was in Burma, a sodden morning of the rains. A sickly light, like yellow tinfoil, was slanting over the high walls into the jail yard. We were waiting outside the condemned cells, a row of sheds fronted with double bars, like small animal cages. Each cell measured about ten feet by ten and was quite bare within except for a plan bed and a pot of drinking water. In some of them brown silent men were squatting at the inner bars, with their blankets draped round them. These were the condemned men, due to be hanged within the next week or two.

6. It is curious, but till that moment I had never realized what it means to destroy a healthy, conscious man. When I saw the prisoner step aside to avoid the puddle, I saw the mystery, the unspeakable wrongness, of cutting a life short when it is in full tide. This man was not dying, he was alive just as we were alive. All the organs of his body were working – bowels digesting food, skin renewing itself, nails growing, tissues forming – all toiling away in solemn foolery.

7. One prisoner had been brought out of his cell. He was a Hindu, a puny wisp of a man, with a shaven head and vague liquid eyes. He had a thick sprouting moustache, absurdly too big for his body, rather like the moustache of a comic man on the films. Six tall Indian warders were guarding him and getting him ready for the gallows. Two of them stood by with rifles and fixed bayonets, while the others handcuffed him, passed a chain through his handcuffs and fixed it to their belts, and lashed his arms tight to his sides. The crowded very close about him, with their hands always on him in a careful, caressing grip, as though all the while feeling him to make sure he was there. It was like men handling a fish which is still alive and may jump back into the water. But he stood quite unresisting, yielding his arms limply to the ropes, as though he hardly noticed what was happening.

10. Four main sections. 1. Lead up to key event Description of setting Description of prisoner Description of Superintendant/Head jailer Journey to the gallows Incident with the dog

11. 2. Orwell’s View “It is curious, but till that moment I had never realised what it means to destroy a healthy, conscious man … I saw the mystery, the unspeakable wrongness, of cutting a life short when it is in full tide… This man was not dying, he was alive just as we were alive. All the organs in his body were working … all toiling away in solemn foolery. He and we were a party of men walking together, seeing, hearing, feeling, understanding the same world; and in two minutes, with a sudden snap, one of us would be gone – one mind less, one world less.”

12. 3. The Hanging Description of overgrown gallows area Description of gallows Prisoner climbing gallows Prisoner chanting Tension builds/delay/impatient response Final order Description of dead body

13. 4. The Aftermath Superintendant changed Francis gossiping Laughter Drinking Ending

14. In pairs you are going to be given a question (or two!) to answer about the text. You will then share your answers with your group as a whole. Once you are all agreed on having the best answers to each of your questions, we will feed back as a class and see what kind of notes we have.

15. With specific reference to word choice and imagery show how Orwell creates a very particular mood in the opening paragraph of his account. Mood/atmosphere: …? “sodden” Suggests… “sickly light like yellow tinfoil” Suggests… “condemned” Suggests… “like small animal cages” Suggests… “brown silent men were squatting at the inner bars” Suggests…

16. The opening depicts a scene which…. This sets the tone as… The setting is important because…

17. 1. Which words and phrases are particularly effective in helping you to create a vivid picture of the condemned prisoner? Describe your emotional response (as a reader) to the man and his predicament. “Hindu” Effective because… as a reader I felt… “puny wisp of a man, with a shaven head and vague liquid eyes” Effective because… makes us feel… “a thick sprouting moustache…absurdly too big for his body, rather like the moustache of a comic man on the films.” Effective because… “he stood quite unresisting” “yielding his arms limply to the ropes, as though he hardly noticed what was happening.”

18. “lashed his arms tight to his sides.” What does this suggest? “crowded very close about him” “hands always on him in a careful caressing grip” “it was like men handling a fish which is still alive and may jump back into the water.”

19. Oxymoron Juxtaposition Irony Dramatic Irony Dark/Black humour Comic relief Stream of consciousness

21. It has been argued that most prose reflects mankind’s pessimism and obsession with the dark side of life. By close reference to one essay, short story or novel show whether you agree or disagree with this view.

22. Using the essay plan work out a PLAN for this essay. Make sure you are answering the question for every point you make.