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2 APRIL 2015 Your clean hard copy of your Keep Calm and Carry On Research Paper. A pen A highlighter An independent reading book If you don’t have a clean hard copy, you will need a blank sheet of paper. Read Silently Today’s Agenda Bell Activity: You will need to supply the following: Beginning a new IRB bookmark Fixing plagiarism errors Working with nouns and pronouns.
IRB BOOKMARK APRIL 2 – APRIL MINUTES DUE BY NEXT FRIDAY YOU CAN COUNT THE MINUTES & PAGES YOU READ TODAY DON’T FORGET TO INCLUDE THE TITLE & AUTHOR’S NAME
PLAGIARISM ERRORS: Go through your scored paper and finds those points that have been marked as containing plagiarism. Mark the corresponding points in your clean copy with a highlighter. Use the class copies of the research documents to fix the errors. Write the corrections neatly onto your clean copy. Staple the corrected copy to the front of your scored copy and submit both to the basket.
WRONG SOURCE? 1.Contrast scored document with your clean document. 2.Mark the errors on your clean document using a highlighter. 3.Find the correct source by search through the RESEARCH DOCUMENTS. 4.Write the correct source NEATLY in parenthesis above the original error. VERBATIM OR POORLY DISGUISED PLAGIARISM 1.Contrast scored document with your clean document. 2.Mark the errors on your clean document using a highlighter. 3.Rewrite the statements using your own words neatly above the plagiarized phrases. NO CITATION PROVIDED 1.Contrast scored document with your clean document. 2.Neatly write in the missing citation and then highlight the new citation.
RULES FOR REDACTING REDUNDANT CITATIONS! 1. It MUST be the LAST revision step done. 2. Always work through the essay BACKWARDS 3. Remember citations do not apply beyond paragraph breaks.
Britain commissioned propaganda posters in spring of The posters were to boost people’s morals. The posters were to give a message from the king to his people telling that he is doing his best to protect the nation (Lewis). Britain feared that they would be gas attacked, bombed, and invaded so they made the help people through the attacks (Lewis). There were three posters they were all to be similar, they also made it difficult to have enemies to counterfeit the items (Lewis). The first poster read “Freedom is in Peril Defend it With All Your might” which had a green background (Slack). The second read “Your Courage, Your Cheerfulness, Your Resolution Will Bring Us to Victory” had a blue background (Slack). The last read “Keep Calm and Carry on” which was mostly meant to be used during an invasion (Lewis).
Transition slide Corrected essays attached to scored essays in the basket. Redacted essays in the basket Research Class Copies placed on the table under the flag. Portfolios placed on the metal cart at the front of the class. Take out your notes on nouns & pronouns. Take out your orange sheet of answers. You will need a pen.
1.Everyone at the party enjoyed his or her evening. 2.The car has a leak in its transmission. 3.Wearing a hat when it snows is wise. 4.He sings loudly with the radio. 5.The cow twitched its tail at the fly. 6.Someone from the circus led the injured horse out of the ring. 7.Joey loves hockey. He goes to Hockey Homeland every Tuesday. 8.Bob’s aunt asked him to catch her dog. 9.The audience clapped its hands.
Joe was overcome with happiness when Missy said Missy would marry Joe. Joe was overcome with happiness when Missy said _______would marry _____.
Bob’s dad's relentless inquisition about Bob’s whereabouts last night finally caused Bob to break down and tell Bob’s dad the truth. a.Bob’s dad's relentless inquisition about _________ whereabouts last night finally caused __________to break down and tell _________ dad the truth.
Dori thought the smack of jellyfish looked like an amusement park. Dori was unaware of a smack’s lethal potential and Dori bounced through the smack gleefully, hitting several of the jellyfish before Dori was stung. Dori thought the smack of jellyfish looked like an amusement park. ________ was unaware of __________ lethal potential and ___________bounced through ____________ gleefully, hitting several of _________before _______ was stung.